Ah thank you for the lovely comments and friendly tips.
Unfortunately I am not yet familiar with Mibba enough to know how to edit published pieces...is it possible?
Well, not only was it about some of the things you stated, but the author actually based it of a young girl he [i]liked[/i].... (During this time he was an older man and "Alice" was a child.)
Some of the things that happened and mentioned in the book represented some of her family members and the things that happened around the house...
Like in the book & mentioned in the disney animation, the white rabbit, at his house calls out for a girl known as "Mary-ann". That was said to be based off her mother who called all the maids around the house Mary-ann.
The White Queen: represented the girls older sister.
The Red Queen: was her mother.
They is a lot more, they even have a complete book that has notes to all that can be mentioned and hidden.
I really liked reading this. Lewis Caroll was definitely an interesting man and I always wonder what he was thinking while he wrote his books. The Chronicles of Narnia also seem to have things hidden in them. I love the classics and this was very well written. Good job! Really enjoyable, and from a girl who doesn't normally read reviews, that's something to me. :)
Good job! This isn't really something I had realized before..like the person below me said, you have a stray italics tag, just so you know :) Very well researched/written!