July 12th, 2013 at 06:17pm
The Hunger Games - Comments
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I've seen a few of the big reviewers out there (yahoo) make the same mistake with the Peeta/Katniss relationship. Overall a nice review, though. Can't wait for the movie!February 22nd, 2012 at 08:25pm
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Nice review; I love the Hunger Games.February 22nd, 2012 at 12:03am
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Thanks, I'll go and fix that now. The reason I used 'childhood friend' is because I thought I saw that in the book somewhere, or some other place. I'll change that tooJanuary 25th, 2012 at 10:19pm
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Nice review! Although I disagreed with your opinion on a character or two, it was pretty well written. You have a few awkward sentences, but you've got one crucial plot mistake:
[i]Then Katniss’s childhood friend, Peeta, is picked and they’re shipped off to the capitol.[/i]
Capitol should be capitalized, but the big mistake here is the term 'childhood friend'. They were never friends; before the Games, they hadn't even spoken, so that term is incorrect. She had only one run-in with him where he tossed bread to her and then she mentioned he stared at her sometimes. That's it. At the start of the story, the term 'childhood friend' is a vast overstatement. I'd go back and fix that.
Other than that, everything else was okay. Not too shabby of a review.January 25th, 2012 at 10:03pm
Very well written article!