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  • Guy Ripley.

    Guy Ripley. (100)

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    Those dishes...they had so much to live for....

    Aaaaaa, I loved, loved, loooooved it.
    :]

    Lawl. I had to mark a checkbox that said "I understand" even though I didn't read what was above. Heh.

    Important post. e.e
    August 5th, 2007 at 08:24am
  • CyanideandHappiness

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    Okay, I dont ever read slash..I just dont like it and I have my reasons.
    But, aside from all the boysex stuff, it was a really good story.
    Mostly because your writing is really good, and everything just flows really nicely.
    To be honest, this is the first ever slash I have read completely through so far, good work!

    <3CyanideandHappiness
    June 7th, 2007 at 01:49am
  • das nadine.

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    wow .

    woooooooow . i love it .whooop .

    and hello , fellow cult member . Shifty
    June 6th, 2007 at 10:43am
  • Fish Camp

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    I agree with A Melancholy Autumn, best slash so far.

    I do love this pairing as well. The way the story was told...it was...captivating. Really. It pulled me in in the beginning and hasn't let me go yet.

    Great!
    June 5th, 2007 at 09:50pm
  • astroz0mbie

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    This is the best slash I've read so far.
    The wording is perfect. There is not a single moment I wasn't completely into it. I normally dislike this kind of slash, but this is an exception. The plot is so original...the flashback, everything.
    June 5th, 2007 at 01:22am
  • carcinogenic.

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    AWWWWW.
    -bottom lip trembles-
    Awww.
    Poor boys...

    Psst... I like this one too. =D
    &#9829;
    May 31st, 2007 at 03:32am
  • mweep!!

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    that was really really good!
    i loved it!!!
    i hope u write more one shots, this was amazing!!
    great job!!!
    May 28th, 2007 at 05:57am
  • allie-friggin-tastic

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    this was a weird one... but good...
    are you going to continue?
    May 26th, 2007 at 09:00pm
  • Pillow.Talk

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    Wow
    That was heartless of Frank
    What Gerard did was right
    Really well done
    You're an excellent author
    May 26th, 2007 at 10:26am
  • illegally_legal

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    wow, I lurves this one-shot!!! ^_______^ squeeeeeeeee!!!!
    May 25th, 2007 at 09:53am
  • bizznitch

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    That's really good ;]
    Great writing.
    May 23rd, 2007 at 09:14pm
  • GetOutWhileYouCan

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    woah!!! i LOVED IT!! i really want more..even if it is a one-shot =/

    it was amazingly written and I felt like i was right there =] I loved the tenses and stuff you wrote in aswell.
    May 23rd, 2007 at 06:12pm
  • Chibi

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    Delightfully sad. Heartbreaking, really.
    May 23rd, 2007 at 07:41am
  • crazy.beautiful

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    wow, that was awesome, i loved it like woah!
    May 23rd, 2007 at 04:13am
  • Matt Sanders;

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    I loved it.
    You should write more one-shots.
    That is one of the best I have read.
    May 23rd, 2007 at 03:46am
  • BeMyEscape;

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    This was really good. I really liked it! I hope you write more one-shots that have this great of quality to it. I love your choices of words also.
    May 23rd, 2007 at 03:09am
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