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  • buddygirl365

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    OMG OMG OMG OMG you need to write more i lovoe this story
    February 19th, 2010 at 09:58pm
  • Nothing_At_All

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    YUS!!! AN UPDATION!!! FINALLY!!!

    I'm a little uncomfortable with the naughty stuff, but nice update!

    HUGS AND KISSES!!!
    February 28th, 2009 at 06:03am
  • neonbluepunk

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    *Sobs* its so sad. Dx
    February 27th, 2009 at 07:46pm
  • M451n

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    YOU'RE NOT DEAD!!!! xD

    very sexy, by the way!
    February 25th, 2009 at 02:28am
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    YOU'RE NOT DEAD!!!! xD

    very sexy, by the way!
    February 25th, 2009 at 02:28am
  • Dorian Gray

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    It's so frustrating to not know how Aiden is, right now, I mean. I just miss him so much. Sad

    But that chapter was so hot! :cheese:

    You are amazing! :arms:
    February 24th, 2009 at 03:34pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    nice job love, and you've still got the friggin song stuck in your head?
    February 24th, 2009 at 07:56am
  • Alice Verney

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    poor frankie andd gee
    February 24th, 2009 at 06:27am
  • Nothing_At_All

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    Aww, poor Cole!

    I feel so bad for Logan, he's pining over Aiden, and Aiden's fucking some hot guy.

    I'll start reading your new story ASAP! I'm already 10 chapters behind! I suck so bad...I'm the worst friend ever!
    February 2nd, 2009 at 04:41am
  • Alice Verney

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    poor logan
    January 31st, 2009 at 05:10am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    kinda sad
    January 29th, 2009 at 03:07am
  • Dorian Gray

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    Aw, Logan is moving on too? Cole seems like a really sweet guy In Love

    Beautiful update! :arms:
    January 28th, 2009 at 08:23pm
  • Nothing_At_All

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    Holy Motherfucking CHEESE-PUFFS!!!!!!

    I haven't commented in so fucking long! With exams and my sister moving into my room, I haven't had any time to go on the internet.

    I'm so sorry Meggy, please please don't hate me for not reading!

    I went and read all the ones I'd missed. It took me at least an hour and a half, but I did it cause I luv you!

    All I can say is: I don't like this whole Luke thing. I want Aiden and Logan to get back together, being the hopeless romantic that I am.

    I promise I will never get this far behind again. Pinky-promise.
    January 25th, 2009 at 11:46pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    holy fuck
    January 25th, 2009 at 02:23am
  • Dorian Gray

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    Haha I knew I recognized that lyric from somewhere! :lmfao Wow I haven't listened to Tokio Hotel in ages.

    Gorgeous update, honey. It's so goddamn amazing and sexy and amazing and bloody brilliant and perfect and gorgeous and amazing and wonderful. I love this so much.

    I think it's such an amazing twist that Aiden is starting to actually feel deep things for Luke, and then Luke blurts out that he loves Aiden. Did he mean it or did it just slip out in the literal heat of the moment? It would be so beautiful if he did mean it. In Love

    I feel so guilty for cheering Aiden and Luke on though, when I think about Logan being paralyzed and Frank and Gerard trying to find Aiden. Sad

    Amazing update, I hope to see more soonish! :arms:
    January 25th, 2009 at 12:07am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    oh noes
    January 22nd, 2009 at 09:33pm
  • Dorian Gray

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    Aiden, you whore! :crazy:

    They seriously need to find Aiden fast! Cry
    January 22nd, 2009 at 08:02pm
  • Alice Verney

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    cute udate
    January 20th, 2009 at 02:20am
  • Dorian Gray

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    The first part was beautiful Cry

    Please let me murder Mikey when he's sleeping so Aiden can go back to Logan? I can kill Lindsey when I'm at it too! :crazy:

    I just want Logan and Aiden back together... Sad

    Amazing update! I'd love to read one of those first chapters for you, but I can't give proper con-crit. It's my big weakness, I can't find bad things and point it out, it's just impossible.

    :arms:
    January 18th, 2009 at 10:22am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    I can see that this is the product of after writer's block, not too bad
    January 18th, 2009 at 06:55am
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