Wrinkles. - Comments

Awww! This was soo cute!
I Loved it =P

This was awesome I loved it.

Awesum. its rly cute and sweet. i love it.
XD

Awww that was so beautiful. I love it how they were just content with holding one another and not sexing one another. It was very well written and I really enjoyed reading it. I loved it too how it was set in Australia. And I laughed at the bit about us being loud. We are loud, aren't we :XD. It was a really original idea. Usually people write about Gerard and Frank fucking and keeping it a secret or whatever. But these two are just keeping the fact that they love one another as a secret. And I think you did a really great job of conveying that :)
Nice work :D

ZAP!

oh my god.
that was amazing!
it was so bittersweet, so touching, so.... idk I don't wanna sound like a book review.
anyway, I loved it.
and at the end? I died a little inside [in the good way]
you did a great job, I guess is the main thing I'm trying to say ^.^

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WHY HAVE I NOT READ THIS SOONER??????
Seriously, Kat this was incredible. I couldn't tear my eyes away from the screen...my ice cream almost melted over the keyboard. It was amazing.
I was a bit hesitant at first, because I've read tour stories before and I don't particularly like them...but man, I judged this way too fast.

“More than that,” I whispered, “We’ll be soul mates. Not the crappy, cliché kind where they’re in love forever, but the kind that have a type of love that will always last, even when we’re with other people, which will surely happen. We’ll still be together and still be soul mates. Forever.”

Even though I do not believe in soul mates, true love, etc. That made me melt into a puddle of love (amongst my ice cream)
Beautiful Kat...I can't sum up how amazing your writing is.

That was so awesome. . I do believe in soulmates and i love how it was said in your oneshot. . awwwww. . so true. .

awww poor frank

That was awesome! God, I love it. Well done! x]

One shot for contest!!

But feedback would still be appreciated. x]