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  • Purr Like A Cat;

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    Danger XD can you please update this story I really like it and I miss it.Pawease *puppy dog pouts* I'll do anything
    September 6th, 2010 at 02:14pm
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    HAHA chapter four was so freaking funny.God thats just gold pure freaking gold and funny.I was going "oh my god" dude that has got to be weird to explain.
    February 13th, 2010 at 03:25pm
  • oxford comma.

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    You can go here to find the rest.
    September 14th, 2009 at 08:22am
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    i really adore this story, i really hope you post the rest.
    September 11th, 2009 at 02:14pm
  • GreenRandomness

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    Question...Are you gonna post more...i hate to hassle you but i love it =) im hunting for it on the other site...but i cant find it.
    i LOVE LOVE LOVE it...so please update soon?
    September 10th, 2009 at 04:34am
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    i really like this story I hope you update soon
    February 27th, 2009 at 05:37am
  • jonasroq

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    OMG this story is AMAZING!!! You have got to update, please please please! I'm begging you!
    December 3rd, 2008 at 11:10pm
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    *comments*
    November 9th, 2008 at 03:19am
  • Crazy4NCIS

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    I love it! Continue please. Oh, is Nick supposed to be autistic?
    November 8th, 2008 at 10:12pm
  • cutiechickypoo

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    I love it
    November 8th, 2008 at 03:55pm
  • Kauliboo

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    I love it! It's WAY different but still awesome!
    November 8th, 2008 at 05:44am
  • oxford comma.

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    (I know I posted this on the other site, but it should be here, too.)

    I like this chapter because it gives more insight into Nick, and into his and Joe's relationship.
    I like how we're taken through the day and all the little details are given throughout which elaborate on Nick's character.
    (I figure I should explain why I liked the 'tantrum' line) because it says, it "only" lasted fifteen minutes. Shows that tantrums can be much worse when coming from Nick.
    My favorite lines:

    "It's Tuesday," he reminds me.

    purple bowls, for breakfast time

    the added distress of accidentally putting something on backwards.

    The tantrum only lasted

    I'm internally disappointed in myself.

    not only the loss, but also the amount of change.

    I can't find it in myself to wish it hadn't happened.
    November 2nd, 2008 at 08:22pm
  • oxford comma.

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    I really like the beginning (first two paragraphs.) I had to read it three times to fully grasp it. At first, I thought Joe was looking at someone else, and I was pleasantly surprised when it turned out he was looking at his own reflectiong and describing himself.
    I like the point of his running behind his desired schedule. That word really stuck out to me.
    I enjoyed the whole interaction between Joe and Jody because it was realistic. Things are bound to be awkward in that sort of situation, especially when one (Joe) is pre-occupied and the other (Jody) is at ease.
    The only thing that confused me is why Joe leaves his house, goes to get coffee, and then heads back towards (presumably) his house. Wouldn't it make more sense for him to have a coffee maker at his house? Was he house sitting? That's the only thing that I'd like to be more clear.
    Other than that, I like how this is written and I'm looking forward to more.
    My favorite lines:

    my life is run by the clock.

    the blinking red light that means the home is protected

    Two minutes that have the potential of making all the difference.

    It isn’t worth the stress if I’m late

    “I noticed you from… from over here.”
    October 28th, 2008 at 05:51am
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