I have to say my favorite few lines of this entire first chapter had to be these: "Where was the excitement in it all? Isn’t that what they always say on the Discover channel, that the world is filled with so much wonder? I begged to differ."
The fact that everything happened so quickly and so abruptly really got me into the story -- I definitely wouldn't mind if you continued it as a small series. :D
"Where was the excitement in it all? Isn’t that what they always say on the Discover channel, that the world is filled with so much wonder? I begged to differ."
The fact that everything happened so quickly and so abruptly really got me into the story -- I definitely wouldn't mind if you continued it as a small series. :D