hah i liked it :) i thgouth it was cute, and your right there arent that many tom stories on this sight :( so when i found yours and saw that its actaully good i got very happy haha
so yeah, this is pretty nice. i liked the setup of everything, and there are like, zil spelling/grammar issues. [that's how people get on my good side. lol.] the only thing that bothered me, and very slightly, was that Lila liked being a damsel in distress, and repeatedly calls Tom her hero. but that's just the feminist-y side of me showing through, i bet.
Loved the update x