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  • fool's paradise

    fool's paradise (1000)

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    This was a very beautifully written story. And don't apologize for the religious references, they fit very well.

    This story seemed almost Greek in its form of tragedy, and Greek tragedy is amazing. It is so deep and emotional, and your story had that.

    I saw no spelling or grammatical errors... so congratulations with that.

    You are a very talented author, and your speech flow was enviable.

    Great job, and keep writing.
    May 26th, 2009 at 02:49am
  • hello; winter

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    I very, very, very much like this story.
    The religious references were amazing, don't ask me why, because I'm not exactly sure, but they added that certain something to the story, which made it amazing.
    And also the beginning, the love as strong as diamonds, love as soft as silk, love as beautiful as the moon. That made me smile, and it touched my heart. ;D
    March 8th, 2009 at 12:53am
  • krinay1

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    incest rules!!!
    January 29th, 2009 at 11:36pm
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