Omg i loved the ending!!! Can you make a sequel where maybe Nick finds real love then maybe Joe comes back in and he has totally changed and Nick has a hard time deciding who he wants to stay with? You are an amazing writer i hope you write more jonascest stories soon..Bye
Was that comment long enough and pointless enough? Like, wow. Haha. It's to make up for all my non-commenting prior this week :]
I might have said this on lj, but I can't really remember. So I'll just add it in xD Nick abuse = my life, so I grovel at your feet. Reading this story and imaging Nick just getting pummeled absolutely makes my day, every time :mrgreen:
So, sorry that I've completely failed at reading and commenting this lately D: Being sick, what a bitch. Anyways.
So, I'm sitting here at my very Christian grandparents' house, lol, getting all caught up with this story, looking over my shoulder every five seconds, absolutely paraniod...good thing you didn't have any random smut scenes :XD
Uhm, yeah. I'm not entirely sure if that paragraph above really had a point or made any sense. But holy shiznit! This is over? Wow. I feel so out of it. That's what I get for not reading anything for more than a week, I guess! But, yeah. I'm definitely glad that Nick left Joe, bahah, just sucks that he didn't kill him before he went! Don't worry Joey, Catie and I will be coming soon with our kunais, so that you don't have to suffer the tragedies of eviction...Come on, we all know that without Nick to pay rent, Joe's gonna get evicted!! Bahaha, then he'll be a bum on the street while Nick is living the good life!! :mrgreen:
Anyway, enough of that. I loved this. Usually a Jonas fic is all lovey dovey and God forbid if one of the Jonas Brothers is portrayed as anything other than an amazingly nice guy, right? So, you, making Joe an abusive piece of shit? Yes, I pretty much love you for that XD
And I think it goes without saying, that if you ever DO write a sequel? I'll read it :XD
I think, that if/when Nick leaves, he will find a nice rich man, and Joe will lose the house/apt., and then try to crawl back to Nick, and Nick will spit in his face and say; "Sorry asshole. You're my brother, not my lover." :3
And Kevin will be the rich guy Nick meets. :lmfao j/k. ...Or am I? .___.
ANYWHOO. CATIE. I'M postcardsandlies ON AIM. START TALKING TO ME! I ADDED YOU! >:C
I think Joe's an asshole who needs to be punched in the dick. :file:
Knowing that I am to blame, for leaving your heart out in the rain... before you go, I wanted to say, I'm sorry, for breaking all the promises I was never around to keep.
L33Z3 (2:50:42 PM): I get the feeling Joe is feeling bad too.. not over this in particular, but over his life. He wants to "own" Nick so bad, to have him to himself, because he's always there when he gets home and he's the only one who stays with him no matter what.
L33Z3 (2:50:55 PM): and that was not for the roleplay. xP
whiteskinnyjeans (2:51:12 PM): thats the whole point of it all: he doesn't want to loose him so he does whatever it takes.. including abuse
L33Z3 (2:51:49 PM): Exactly. so Sad... but it's happened in real life so he's not the only one... it's still wrong though.. and sexyyy. xP
whiteskinnyjeans (2:52:03 PM): yeaahh. x) Nick's just a studmuffin.
L33Z3 (2:52:13 PM): lmaooo x)
whiteskinnyjeans (2:52:15 PM): joe even said that in real life
whiteskinnyjeans (2:52:17 PM): in a video =D
L33Z3 (2:52:26 PM): Omj yeahhh xP
whiteskinnyjeans (2:52:41 PM): &that's nick. hes's a studmuffin!