Ha ha, I found a few mistakes: Nikki of cause was to busy making out with Kellan= change the 'cause' to 'course'. You’re ground young man= change 'ground' to 'grounded' And of course the url link.
Dude! It was such a cute flashback!! You make me smile lol I hope he would see Jess soon!!! (Lucky haha) just the URL doesnt work, but except that everything awesome!! <<3 Mai