January 13th, 2009 at 01:43pm
Reaper - Comments
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I think you should update this story xDJanuary 12th, 2009 at 12:17pm
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Just read chapter one, why didnt i read it earlier? I don't know. But thats sad :[January 12th, 2009 at 12:05pm
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hmmmm...i really like it
i'm hooked, i'd really like to read more
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I'm interested to see where this goes...November 4th, 2008 at 06:27pm
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That was harsh; him yelling at his parents like that, in chapter two, I mean. For him to say all that junk. Owwiee. :XD Rather upsetting the whole thing, really.
Buuuut, I don't know, don't take this meanly, some of the emotions right at the end of the second chapter didn't feel real enough. I mean, it's one thing to say that you blame yourself, and then there's another thing in actually meaning it, if that makes sense. If he really blamed himself, I'm sure he'd rather take it out on himself rather than other people like big-nose and his parents. Sure, to some extent he'd lash out at others, but at the end of the day, he'd be beating himself up and he'd be a lot more upset.
And I said that don't take it the wrong way! :XD
But in general, the chapter was good. x]November 4th, 2008 at 11:24am -
I liked it :con:
I mean, like, you had it quite childish there for a moment, but you were able to convey the emotions pretty well.
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+ we all know that coffee is just the liquid of the gods.
GODS PISS!
November 2nd, 2008 at 07:03am
And thanks for the ded <3