Ashes. - Comments

OMFGOMFGOMFG. D:< YOU MADE ME CRY, I absolutely adored this. Truly. Twas a job well done.<3

I love how you mixed the hint of The Crow.
I really adored that =']
That movie, and those two men. Always an inspiration in my life.

~NN

This was great, I loved it.
When Bam was speaking to him before they pulled the plug, I nearly cried. I love how much emotion you put into this, it's fantastic.
And the ending was perfect. I simply adored it!

VIIIILLLEEEEE D':

The Crow.
Although, I have to admit that I was a bit tentative on how you would pull off a "Crow" inspired one-shot, but made my fears seem like a gross over-reaction.
Not only is this a gorgeous one-shot, but I have no doubt that Brandon Lee would be proud (not that I have any idea of what the man thought, but hey! Its a nice sentiment, eh?)

I read through the first bit and nearly cried at the pure emotion Bam shows. You can so tell that he truly, deeply, and madly needs Ville to have a coherent existence.

"I love you so much, Ville. Maybe too much to some people."

I let a tear fall.

"I love your voice, no matter what you're doing. Singing, talking, anything. Your voice is my lullaby."

"I love your skin, inked and pure. The little points of your hips, the intricate lines that define them, every tattoo we share."

"I love your hair, how it felt against my cheek. It's so soft, baby. I'd give up everything in the world just to have your head next to my pillow again."

"I adore your eyes; if someone made me choose my favorite part of you, that would be my answer. If they are the windows to the soul, then you're the most beautiful person ever to grace the earth."

"I don't know how to live without you, Ville. I don't want to. I shouldn't have to do this, but I do."

"I love you so fucking much, Ville Hermanni Valo."

A sob fought out from my throat, echoing around the quiet room. My face was wet, tear-stained. I loved him, I still do. I always will, always have. He was, is, my meaning in life.

That scene was just...
So damned good. The emotion simply drips from every word.

And then when the story finally ends! I was shocked as hell!
I know I should have been expecting it, since The Crow was your muse, but Jesus! That was so perfect!


Wonderful job. Absolutely fantastic.