I love this series!! I love how you use real life drama and still make it look so good!! I love how the plot is awesome, and how Mirmo is so sweet to Tem, and how Karen loves Tem so much, especially under the circumstances of which he was made.. I just adore your writing.. I don't think there are really any grammitical errors!! The only thing that I can think of that would make the story better is if Karen or Mirno go on a mission and when they do go, something goes down at the Temple with Tem or somebody, maybe the Temple gets attacked... Ehh.. I don't know... But, any way, where I was going with my ramblings is, I love this story!! And I really hope you write more soon!!
I love how you use real life drama and still make it look so good!!
I love how the plot is awesome, and how Mirmo is so sweet to Tem, and how Karen loves Tem so much, especially under the circumstances of which he was made..
I just adore your writing.. I don't think there are really any grammitical errors!!
The only thing that I can think of that would make the story better is if Karen or Mirno go on a mission and when they do go, something goes down at the Temple with Tem or somebody, maybe the Temple gets attacked... Ehh.. I don't know...
But, any way, where I was going with my ramblings is, I love this story!!
And I really hope you write more soon!!