Telling the Two Apart - Comments

This story is amazing.
I could never write like this, even with years of experience.
Y'know if you made this not a fan-fic I'm sure that you could get it publishes. I love it.

Hey... I have been reading this story and I think it is really good. You're a very good writter too.
I like how you describe all the settings and the feelings and stuff like that!
I really like your story!
More when you can please...

Sorry about the lack of updates. There's a lot going on for me right now; busy and drained so I haven't had much "inspiration," if you will. More soon.

I'm only on chapter five right now, but I really really love this story. I like how it's paced; not everything is crammed together and overly dramatic like a lot of stories. I like how you don't use common vocabulary, too.

Gabe Saporta.:

Your story is beyond extrordinary.
Pure perfection! :)

I love it, it's so cute.
Write more please. You're a very talented writer.

I love this story.

Your story is beyond extrordinary.
Pure perfection! :)

Rofl.
I'm only up to chapter three, but this is really quite amusing.

"The fashionable wait until at least ten-thirty,"

Well, we must respect all animals. XD

I'm glad you read this.

Enter now the feline companion

I loved that bit.

Smething about using Feline companion striked me so much more that the simple, "cat".

I loved the description in that last update. The first sentence made me go, wha? though, because you used a really big word that I had never ever heard of.

But you should update soon. Because I love this story.

everytime i see the mibba story reply notification in my inbox i let out a little squee of delight. this fic is fantastic, i really loved the way you described death in chapter 14. your writing gives off a good, clear picture in my head and i enjoy being able to lose myself in a story and see it as if i were there witnessing it.

i wanted to comment on the picture you made for the story as well, it really looks like it could be on the cover of an actual book. so thank you for having such amazing skills and sharing them with the rest of us. i can't wait for the next update! ^___^

Aaw. That last chapter was cute.

I finally finished reading it

I love it... It's the first non frerard story that I really find interesting
I don't really know how to comment stories...
so you should just know that it's really good

More when you can :D

This story is so amazingly written, you have so much talent.
It seems real, and it's not like another fanfic, it's like it could actually happen.
I absolutely love it, and I can't wait for more. =]

OMG! This is an awesome story! <3 I hope to read more of it when you update it! Plese let me know if you do! This story has hooked me and now I want to read more. XD

- Chowder

this is a lot better than my stories when it comes to length and originality. more soon pwease!!

Oh, I didn't know if you read it or not; I'm glad you did!

Yeah, I can't even do one-shots; everything has to be real length with me. Except that one tiny chapter in there.

I do wish I could do one-shots though. XDD

i read this last night and still not too sure what to say other than i can't wait to read more. i don't know how to critique properly so i won't even try. i'm happy it's not another "oh poor girl here's gerard to save her life and now they're in love and married in two chapters" fic.