Telling the Two Apart - Comments

Stinky.:

I really, really like this. Not only do you use incredible descriptive details,
you also have a really interesting vocabulary. The words you use really intrigue me.
Your pacing is really good too; nothing at all seems rushed.
And this idea is one of the most original and creative I've read in a long time.
I'm really looking forward to reading some more of this. =)

Thank you. Invaluable comment. <3

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I really, really like this. Not only do you use incredible descriptive details,
you also have a really interesting vocabulary. The words you use really intrigue me.
Your pacing is really good too; nothing at all seems rushed.
And this idea is one of the most original and creative I've read in a long time.
I'm really looking forward to reading some more of this. =)

How cool is your story?! I love it. Hehe. xx

thats a good story, i like it, you write well.