People are stupid for not leaving feedback for this. :grr:
It was a really mature, well-structured piece of writing and it was a very interesting read.
First of all, the description was stunning. You used great detail, which made the story a much more interesting read and it's like I can see into the character's emotions, right into their head. You've got a real talent for descriptive writing.
I liked how the person who told her that he was sorry for her loss was faceless and nameless, it makes it seem more believeable, like she's in her own little world and nothing can really console her in this state.
Her memories always seem so happy of Jim, he seems like such a nice guy and it's like he was the person who looked out for her. And it's like a part of her has died, now that he's gone. That's really sad. And shows how close they were.
I like her optimism throughout the whole thing too. And how she says it won't be long before they're back together.
Wow.
This was great. I envy your writing style. It's incredible. If you ever write anything else, I'll totally read it.
It was a really mature, well-structured piece of writing and it was a very interesting read.
First of all, the description was stunning. You used great detail, which made the story a much more interesting read and it's like I can see into the character's emotions, right into their head. You've got a real talent for descriptive writing.
I liked how the person who told her that he was sorry for her loss was faceless and nameless, it makes it seem more believeable, like she's in her own little world and nothing can really console her in this state.
Her memories always seem so happy of Jim, he seems like such a nice guy and it's like he was the person who looked out for her. And it's like a part of her has died, now that he's gone. That's really sad. And shows how close they were.
I like her optimism throughout the whole thing too. And how she says it won't be long before they're back together.
Wow.
This was great. I envy your writing style. It's incredible. If you ever write anything else, I'll totally read it.