Things Are Shaping up to Be - Comments

GREAT update
more?

Yeah, Brendon, stick up for yourself!
haha =] Thanks for updating.
<3 Manda

wow!! go Brendon!!
i really hate jake, he makes me intensely upset because Brendon is soo much better. I hope that Ryan understands that Brendon is just trying to be a good friend, and possibly more. :)
yay!! congrats!!! good luck! :D!

My head felt like it had been run over by a bus, but when I opened my eyes, my best friend, hopefully with something to make the pain go away.
I guess. Kinda hard. Hope it helps. XD
But Jake needs to go away. Brendon is so much cooler. Anyways.... still love this.
Amazing. XD

The sound of someone trying- and failing considerately- to enter the room quietly echoed loudly in my oversensitive ears.

SUCKAWHAT. that up tharrr^^ is what you call a PHAIL.
Anyways, I liiiiiiiiike this. Obviously.
<3

something to do with jake knocking on the window?

one sentence. okay . . . this is hard!!!

I jolted awake to the sound of knocking on the bedside window and found Jake's face desperately peering through the frosted glass.

okay, that's the best that I can do with one sentence.
I still don't Jake, so feel free to torture him as much as possible . . . please. okay sorry. maybe I'll like him better when he isn't corrupting Ryan.
I <3 Brendon!!! =D!! he'll take care of Ryan.

My head ached, my body was sore, my throat was dry, and Brendon was standing over me, looking like God; a halo of light around him, a glass of water in one hand, and aspirin in the other.

awesome chapter, by the way! :D

Waking up was a usual occurrence, it happened every single day of the year, but some reason, waking up today felt different.

or something like that. Just a suggestion. (:
Anyway, loved the update, and have fun with everything you've got planned (:

I don't like Jake.
He's a very bad influence on our poor, innocent Ry. And I totally wouldn't mind it if he got hit by a bus.
Okay, okay, I didn't mean that, sorry.

Poor Bren. He's going to be worried sick...

Feel better, hon. I'm subscribing, by the way, if it makes you feel any better. :3

aww... that was a sad chapter... :'( and i know how you are feeling about the whole graduating thing... senior year is tough... but you will get through it!!! :D

Awesome chapter. :D
Can't wait for a new one.

I hope you get better..
xx

Ryan???? What is going on with him??? the poor baby.
Jake is making me very upset and he should be more frickin responsible!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want Brendon!!!!! stupid Jake!!!!
oh well, I love your stories!!!! and I'm always soo excited when you update because your characters are soo real. :) :) :) :) :)!!!

Ryan.... why would you do that? I still don't like Jake. But oh well.
I don't care how long I have to wait... I love this story. I love your writing. So take your time. XD

I'm sorry about your knee =[
And pfft, good job, Ryan and Jake, on getting fucked up. haha.
Thanks for updating =]
<3 Manda

This is the first Rydan I've ever read. Now I do read slash of all sorts, including fan fiction ones. But yours is so darn cute it makes my smile widen with each new sentence. I love Ryan and Brendan, they are just too cute, and I never really had a feel for Jake.
Ryans dad is such an ass, I just want him to die and I'm not a fan of his mum either.
I like how you write, it reminds me of something this author said once (cat remember exactly what, haha) about how ts not the size of your vocabulary, but how you use it. So true I think. Except this guy was a total arrogant ass, heh. Bu anyways I better stop dribbling shit.
Sounds like your life is extremely hectic, sorry bout that. It must suck a lot and I shan't pester for updates, just a simple 'can't wait' is good enough for now.

oo yeahhh the steamy-ness! yay!.... that was a good chapter! i cant wait to read the next one!!!

I'm not going to say that I dislike Jake but I have an odd feeling in my tummy about the guy. = ='' BUT THE UPDATE = ♥. You made my day, I love it when you update because everything you write is so real and amazing.

I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter too, by the way. Just letting you know. Not hinting or anything.

Love the update. Hate Jake. Sorry it's true. I NEVER liked him. But anyway seeing that you updated made me so happy you have no idea. I love it! Thanks bunches for updating I can't wait for more!

Y'know, seeing that you updated this made me really, super happy. Actually, it made my day. (And today sucks because I'm sick and my head feels like someone's squishing it....) Anyways...

Have I told you that I don't like Jake? I don't think I have, but yeah.... I don't like Jake. He gives off a bad vibe... and I don't like the fact that he's giving his boyfriend spiked OJ. And poor Ryan, he doesn't even know! And what the hell is Brendon gonna say when he finds out about all of this?!

Gah, so many questions and senarios that can happen! It's making my head ache. I think I'm going to find some useless info channel to watch...

Anyways, lovely update doll. ^-^ Can't wait for another one. And you're right, it is hard to get any motivation these days... (Sorry if this comment makes me seem kinda loopy. I'm blaming the cold medicine.)

Love you!
xoxo <3 - Jordan