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  • Dorian Gray

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    Wow, that was such a heartbreaker. The way you gave Bob and the reader hope at the final moment only to have us all crushed to pieces by Mikey's words.
    Cry

    It was really sweet and Bob's love was so pure and beautiful. The way Mikey was described just made me wanna grab them both and make them kiss. Screw the limits! there are no limitations unless you set them yourself and that's just stupid to do! Mikey could have been Bob's, I just know it.
    Mikey should be Bob's. Cry

    Thanks for showing me this :arms:
    It definitely made me love Bob even more In Love
    May 2nd, 2009 at 02:20pm
  • lups

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    lol. See, I had to force myself to not think it was Frank at the beginning. Everytime I imagined Frank's voice telling the story, I slapped myself (well, not literally) and said ''Focus, Lupi! Focus!!''.. It was obvious that it wasn't Gee 'cause it didn't jump into the ''oh, this is wrong, I'm going to hell, blah blah'' thing. And then, the press conference. I have to say, that desert island video is one of my favorite MCR videos ever, and when you said ''moving the mic so I could talk'' I literally yelled ''BOB!!!!'' -_-* Poor Bob. I KNOW what it's like to watch someone you love walk away with somebody else... It's not nice.

    SO, 1734982759847539 mexican cookies for you :D
    September 4th, 2007 at 08:51pm
  • Bastard Son.

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    Bad Sruti. Bad, bad, bad Sruti! Cry xD
    You made me cry! That was so well written and your first person narrative is awesome for all I can see.
    I could totally see it all. And I cried like a freakin' baby.
    Another sucky comment today. Sorry about that. Oo
    This story was amazing.
    Even if it was only a oneshot. Disgust
    August 29th, 2007 at 11:07pm
  • Mike Dirnt.

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    Aww. Thank you.

    And it's cool I fooled you! *feels cool*
    July 4th, 2007 at 06:28pm
  • doctor.

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    At first I thought it was Gerard...and then I thought Ray.
    haha. This is awesome.
    July 3rd, 2007 at 09:04pm
  • xXxLouie BearxXx

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    oooh we loved it!! <33
    and well we knew it was bob coz you told us before but we prob wouldve got it round the whole TPing the Times Square bit

    Louise + Eriko
    xoxoxoxox
    June 27th, 2007 at 03:55pm
  • Pikachu

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    wow...I suck at guessing. Right at the summary I was like 'its frank'
    And then when it said 'bob' I was like "WTF?"
    Butt Okay So I really liked it. I didn't think it was crap. I liked how you kept the identity hidden until almost the end. *claps*

    <33 katie

    oh wait just read someone elses comment and now im editing this *facepalm*

    OF course it was bob!!!!! The TP-ing. How could I have missed that?
    okay i'll stop now
    June 11th, 2007 at 01:33am
  • Idee Fixe.

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    squee~ kyah~

    bikey luff :D

    it was amazing. I love it :D
    May 28th, 2007 at 12:24pm
  • Fish Camp

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    You pwn me so bad.

    I jumped out of my seat when I read that name.

    And...ow, wow. That was just amazing.

    Loved the description of Mikey.
    May 28th, 2007 at 04:01am
  • lozzieee who.

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    i saw the TP bit and was like "holy hell tis BOBBLES!" thought it was ray at first teehee really awesome work!
    May 28th, 2007 at 12:14am
  • Mike Dirnt.

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    aww. Thanks you guys. :hug:
    May 27th, 2007 at 06:00am
  • kumori.

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    I'm glad I managed to fool someone. No one saw the toilet paper thing? It's hilarious.
    I saw it! as soon as I saw that bit in the story i'm like omg it's bob! lol

    loved the story
    May 27th, 2007 at 05:10am
  • XxK8ExX

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    That was soo sad Cry
    It was reallly well written. Clap
    May 27th, 2007 at 01:16am
  • headfirst4halos

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    That was soo sweet! Thought it was Frankie at first, people always seem to make Frankie and Gerard the one's in love with other band members, but it was pretty obvious it wasn't Gerard! I didn't know it was Bob until the toilet paper bit! But that wasn't in LOTMS, cos it was only last year.
    You made me have to watch that and the album press interview thingy again!
    Great story!
    May 26th, 2007 at 11:10pm
  • folk you please

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    Actually, a soon as you mentioned the toilet paper part, I knew it was Bob.
    That part in Murder Scene was hilarious.
    May 26th, 2007 at 08:51pm
  • Mike Dirnt.

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    Really? Cool!

    I feel so speshul. :shake:

    Also, the eyelash thing was one of the inspirations for this story.
    May 26th, 2007 at 08:15pm
  • Stockholm Syndrome.

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    Whoa!!!!
    That was very well written. X]
    Me and my friends were reading it and kinda started screaming when we figured out it was Bob...O.o
    But really cool, nice work! ^-^
    May 26th, 2007 at 07:45pm
  • Mike Dirnt.

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    :tehe:

    I'm glad I managed to fool someone. No one saw the toilet paper thing? It's hilarious.
    May 26th, 2007 at 07:11pm
  • Jimmy Urine.

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    At first I thought it was Frank too, then I realised who it was at the part about the eyelash. I actually said out loud 'Oh my god, it's Bob!.'
    I hope I didn't wake my dad up...
    I remember pissing myself laughing at Mikey's reaction when I saw it. Then I was like really confused because I couldn't remember whether it was Bob or Frank that did it, but then I was like, Frank was sitting the other side of Gerard so it must have been Bob!

    Anywho. I don't see anything wrong with this. It was wonderfully written. *applauds*
    May 26th, 2007 at 03:39pm
  • feeling weightless;

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    that was awesome! and i thought it was frankie =P
    May 26th, 2007 at 01:01pm