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  • Audioblue

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    Aww.
    So cute.
    June 24th, 2010 at 06:26am
  • pezzie

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    Aww!
    I loved this.
    It was cute, but sad.
    January 8th, 2010 at 03:57am
  • Cristina Scabbia

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    That was really good.

    I loved the whole "buildup" to it all. The overall length of the oneshot was really good too and the whole storyline flowed so well.

    It's so sad that Lacey just wants to hide away under her jacket, away from the world. You brought across the point that Amy cares about her friend really well.

    And then when Amy sees the scars, she doesn't quite know what to do. All she wants to know is why.

    The ending was absolutely adorable, and Amy's such a sweetheart to Lacey. :cute:

    Really good oneshot (and sorry this was kind of useless feedback :cheese:).
    December 31st, 2008 at 02:30am
  • Dr Magical Mystery

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    Wow...that was...
    I'm speechless....
    November 8th, 2008 at 06:46am
  • Spanish Lullaby

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    New oneshot. Tell me what you guys think.
    November 8th, 2008 at 06:27am
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