China Plates and Peas - Comments

Apologies to you too that this took so long, the coursework load for English is a bitch :XD

Original fiction? If it is I love it, it’s not often done with superhero/villain stories.

I think I read something along the lines of this a while back, but you pulled it off better, the whole using the ability thing, and I mean, I read that in a book, which means you’re pretty damn good with this writing stuff.

I love how The pattern on the china was really beginning to piss her off now. that line was just so, I don’t know how to describe it, but I know if it was me something like that would fuck me off.

I love your description; everything is so thorough without going overboard. It wasn’t boring, but it put the image into my head and left room for me to add in details of my own.

You’ve got talent, I think one day you’ll go far in writing if you tried to take it professionally, I really think you will :]

Wow. That was amazing. XDXD I'd love to read the winning entry, if this didn't beat it. This reads very well as a one-shot - clear, concise, comical. (Alliteration! Sorry. Habbit of mine.) Anyway, wonderful job!

Wow. Your's is amazing too! I can't believe I beat that.