This is what the edge of your seat was made for - Comments

OH I loved the whole story
It was awesome

TEAM JIMMY

WOOOHOO!

**Throws confetti**

Yes, I'm so glad you didnt completely go against everything and put her with Oli.. I would've been so majorly bummed out. = p Jimmy was just too perfect for her... =)

I do feel bad for Oli, though. I'm not completely heartless... but it was for the best. She wouldn't have been truly happy with him =(

Btw, you super tease! Making me wait til halfway through the epilogue til I saw who she chose... hahaha. Though it was worth it. I loved every second of it =)

I'm sad to it come to it end, but it was a wild ride while it lasted which I really enjoyed =) Awesome job!

Of course I knew Jimmy was going to win! Okay, well, maybe I was a little worried with the second to last chapter. But only a little. lol.

I loved the ending! She beat God, inherited Hell, and got Jimmy! Does it get any better than that?

I'm sad it's over though. I'll be looking out for more of your amazing writing!

You fooled me! But I am certainly happy Jimmy was picked. I was bummed out when I thought she had chosen Oli instead. This was one of those rare stories. Rare in the since that it was not generic in any way. I loved the creativity and originality of this story. I felt a tad uncomfortable about the God thing but I kept reading because I was too interested in where you were going to take it, what more you had in store for us.

Looking forward to reading more of your work!

YAYYY!

Yay! Team Jimmy Wins! So now he's not only the vampire king, but the king of the underworld as well!

I loved this story! It was freakn amazing and there were so many twist! This story was great and very well written!

That plan was awesome! I love it!

Who is she going to pick?! AHHH! I'm going out of my mind

Definitely worth it!

And her plan is outrageous, but hopefully it'll work! :D

You're still killing me here... I'm dying to know who she picked, dammit!!

Oh my goodness (really great story) But I thought I was the only one who used Johnny Christ!!! (I use it instead of Jesus Christ) It's nice to know there are more people like me ^_^!!!! Wait that may not be a good thing....o_O :P

HOLY HELL That was wicked! I can't wait to see the rest of that battle because it sounds good!
I hope she chooses Jimmy because after all Jimmy was her first. Although she doesn't remember it. XD

damns it!
i hope it is jimmy!
and damn her battle came sooner than thought!

WTF?! It was that close! I almost knew who it was, and then God had to show up and ruin everything. lol. I definitely wasn’t expecting that one. I can’t wait for the next update!

PS: And, yes, I am all Team Jimmy, along with my twin. lol.

Who is she supposed to be with?!
Jimmy? Pwease?!

Haha Oh holy one is here!

Dude, I figure god's going down.. she'll kick his ass..

What I dont know.. and am dying to know is who she picked?!?!

Please let it be Team Jimmy! Please let it be Team Jimmy!!

You made me nearly cry!! Actually welled up and felt a pang in my heart for his pain....

POOR JIMMY! I'm so sad now. This is not good for Team Jimmy.. it's a very sad turn of events.

I can totally understand his hate and frustration.. the poor guy just had his heart ripped out. It's natural to have some hate building up inside.

The mind control is a nice touch, btw. But my guess is she wishes she never swam into Jimmy's mind now.. I'd hate to hear those thoughts. They'd break my heart.

Love it! MORE!! :D

I can understand his hate. I mean I'm sur ehe feels like his whole heart was ripped out and he feels like she's selfish because she stopped him from killing himself when she went off with Oli right?

Poor Jimmy :(

On a brighter note! She has Mind control Awesome!

Short? Kinda, but not really. Suckish? NO! I can’t believe she has mind control. And I really thought she was gonna be with Oli, but that last sentence gave me some hope XD

ps: I'd comment back (profile comments), but I can't on this computer :(

ohh she gave it to oli.. sigh lol
was her mind really made up?
hmm dunno that for sure yet lol
cuase you always surprise us!
loves this

I was expecting an ass kicking (which there kinda was), but I like this outcome a lot more ;)

Uh-oh...Jimmy's coming. I wonder what he'll have to say?

Noooooooooo! This chapter was not a good one for Team Jimmy :(

But aside from that fact, it was a good one overall :) You wrote the sex scene well and with a lot of passion. It was very tasteful :)

I feel so bad for Jimmy... That's even worse than what Oli walked in on. Like a million times worse... that's gotta rip your heart out and squish into mush.

Oli had to go and ruin her frustraions by just laying there and taking the beating. That would piss me off even more. It takes the satisfaction out of the hits.. butthead. hahaha

More soon!!