Very, very good. Once again I am amazed at your way with words. Emotions are very hard to write about (for me at least) and you did them justice in this story. :mrgreen:
The only constructive thing I have to say deals with a mistake many people make. You used "lied" instead of "laid." Like I said, a common grammatical mistake.
Two days, really?
Very, very good. Once again I am amazed at your way with words. Emotions are very hard to write about (for me at least) and you did them justice in this story. :mrgreen:
The only constructive thing I have to say deals with a mistake many people make.
You used "lied" instead of "laid." Like I said, a common grammatical mistake.
You should be proud of this story. =)