We Are Broken - Comments

Bamm! (100)

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You should totally finish. I will be your editor or the chick above me. I love this and u should make it longer. >.< its amazing.

October 9th, 2009 at 06:42am

Quiescent. (125)

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This is a great story and if you're still looking for an editor I can help. That's if you'll accept; I've recently edited Jurassitol's work, if you'd like to comment her about anything.

Anyways, keep writing. If you do accept can you please tell me what chapters I am to read over. (:

October 8th, 2009 at 06:55am

juliet.marie (100)

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great story!!!!

January 24th, 2009 at 05:11am

ettolrahC (100)

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I liiike this really much :)
Oli's quite a poohead, aint he?
More soon?
Smiley

January 2nd, 2009 at 06:09am

Hannah Decor (100)

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omg i love this story. you actually managed to do something orginal here!
i love it love it love it love it and love it more

December 4th, 2008 at 12:37am

Highly Suspicious (100)

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Keep it goingg c:
i love it.

December 1st, 2008 at 05:18am

Ento (100)

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That was good but there are too many loose endings for it too be a one shot, it definately has the potential to be a great story and i think that you should continue it. :D

November 10th, 2008 at 12:57am