Just a Story of One Little Girl - Comments

  • snipenrissiepit

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    hey well done great job please update soon looking super forward to the end
    March 13th, 2013 at 07:54am
  • fearlessgirl

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    this seems pretty good...keep writing.
    May 2nd, 2009 at 03:48am
  • words as weapons

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    keep going and rape
    April 4th, 2009 at 07:37am
  • JennyLynn2012

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    Umm...you should have her runaway to find her dad and then....she finds him ...he loves her to death...and then her adoptive or whatever father tries to take custody but frank fights cause he wants his daughter and the little girl wants frank....and then the little girl is so depressed from all of the fights for custody she starts cutting herself and then somehow frank finds out and he stops her from cutting herself and then you have to make up the rest since this is your story
    April 3rd, 2009 at 11:18pm
  • phoenixcurse

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    yay! incest! idk i read already a while ago but i was bored so here u go! 1 comment fresh from the oven
    January 18th, 2009 at 03:51am
  • Shawn Milke

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    Aw, I love this story.
    And little Frankie is her dad, how lucky is she!
    :cute:

    Her dad is an asshole though,so is Hunter. >_<
    Thye can rot in hell.ol
    I like Aiden though Yes
    Can't wait for the next update (:

    <3
    January 7th, 2009 at 11:45am