The Voices Outside Her Head - Comments

It is strange, but it's a good strange...
I'd like to read more of it, if you ever write more to it XD
This story makes me smile. :)

This is so strange, but it's really awesome. This is something I've never seen before. :shock:

However, I think you should give the narrator a chance to speak. lol

there's a lot of dialog and there should be more from the narrator to help tell the story.