February 19th, 2009 at 11:39am
Yellow Dose of Obsession - Comments
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That's the point.January 16th, 2009 at 09:51am
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Hate to be the guy who breaks the camels back, but i'm bloody confused. what is this story about? it doesn't seem to flow. no offense.January 15th, 2009 at 05:49pm
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wow. That was a nasty case of Delirium, right there.
Mm. i agree with the first comment! woot!
again, THat. Was. Awesome.November 12th, 2008 at 04:08pm -
Thanks a lot. This is one of my most favorite stories, actually.November 11th, 2008 at 05:49pm
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I absolutely loved this.
It was so much different from everything I've encountered on here, seriously.
I liked the fact it was brief, without any unnecessary digressions and over-the-top
metaphors and comparisons, yet you achieved the desired effect.
The whole atmosphere of latent insanity and suspense was overpowering,
and you pulled it off without confusing the reader too much.
The seemingly detached narrative as a great move on your side too, it really
added to the general atmosphere of the story.
And there was that bit that I loved, the ending of one chapter when he said the
Fifth Symphony stopped, or ended, I can't recall. But it made some sort of
impression on me and set the mood for me even more.
I'm just rambling. All in all, amazing. :]November 11th, 2008 at 10:44am
All about Diane, the father and the child being the clown who killed Diane,
Amazing!