Demolition Lovers - Comments

Wow. That was intense. I like your writing style though. You did a great job! It just isn't too clear as to why Frankie left Gerard. I think if you said the why to story might be less confusing. I read the first half twice thinking I missed it.

Wow. That was intense. I like your writing style though. You did a great job!

Why did frankie leave gerard? I don't understand. . you make my heart ache. .That was sad.. .

my_brutal_romance:

wow that was... aw! i felt like crying... that was really good. and really sad. and really sweet. poor gee. <3 i liked it

Thanks =]

wow that was... aw! i felt like crying... that was really good. and really sad. and really sweet. poor gee. <3 i liked it