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  • EmptyInside

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    nice story
    August 11th, 2011 at 11:24am
  • JayCaffrey

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    Dudeeeeeeee
    Your story confused the hell out of me!!! You said it was gonna be angle's POV then its her daughters? You got to make it more clear
    November 9th, 2010 at 03:58am
  • lovehurts

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    I just finished reading both of your stories and the only word that comes to mind is: WOW!
    You are a fantastic writer and I actually thought that Elise was dead in the last chapter especially when Derek said "I understand.
    March 29th, 2010 at 09:22am
  • VendettaMarie

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    Haha of course I comment right before the last chapter. Well love, simply amazing. It was a perfect ending.
    March 28th, 2010 at 04:19am
  • VendettaMarie

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    I just started reading the prequel today and just counldn't stop. It's an amzing story. One of my favourite on mibba. I was so confused at the beginning of this one though. =) Lotsa love Xx
    March 28th, 2010 at 04:12am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    both stories were amazing Love, you did a good job.
    November 18th, 2009 at 06:52am
  • fireplaguemartini

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    This is an amazing story. One of the best I've read, and I have read a fuck load of story. 27 bazillion stars to you, you're SUCH a great writer.
    August 7th, 2009 at 05:00am
  • Chace

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    When I first saw that "17 years later" thing, I was a little confused. Usually they would reunite or something but that would be kinda weird, 20 years apart and all. So I was a little iffy about reading it. It didn't seem all that interesting. Then I read anyway and when her mom died, I got really confused. With MCR and 2 16 year olds and no Angel, no Brian, right?
    But I just finished it and it turned out to be really good. That last chapter had me scared though. You made it sound like she was dead or something which would have sucked.
    Anyway, I loved your story, great ending, and I can't wait to hear more form you. You're obvously an awesome writer so your other stories will most likely have me hooked just as much.
    =) Keep up the good work.
    February 15th, 2009 at 10:58am
  • catastrophe.

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    YOU ENDED IT SO WELL. I think its time you write a Zacky one though.
    February 4th, 2009 at 06:29pm
  • flippinjeans

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    i will miss this story
    February 4th, 2009 at 04:34pm
  • Jei-Ukime

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    Awww...

    well done, it was an amazing story!

    XxX
    February 4th, 2009 at 03:58pm
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    Awwhh
    : D
    February 4th, 2009 at 01:29pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    amazing story, I loved it!
    February 4th, 2009 at 08:17am
  • ShaleseRayEen

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    Loved it.
    Perfect ending.:)
    February 4th, 2009 at 06:21am
  • Alice Verney

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww go zander and elise!!! and yay she survived!
    February 4th, 2009 at 06:11am
  • flippinjeans

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    stupid aaron had to ruin everything
    February 4th, 2009 at 02:40am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    aww I dont want this story to end...love it
    February 4th, 2009 at 02:32am
  • I.AM.A.BUBBLE

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    omg i ike really nearly cried that was so sad the end it was like really sad
    well glad she beet the bEEEEEEP!!!
    i dont want it to end but i wanna now what is goin to happen!!
    February 4th, 2009 at 01:11am
  • Alice Verney

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    ya shes ok and poor brian i hope aaron dies
    February 4th, 2009 at 01:11am
  • flippinjeans

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    wow you got my heart going
    im sorry that i haven't been commenting
    but i am now
    great update
    February 2nd, 2009 at 07:35am
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