Katelyn is also very pleased with this chapter. She thinks it's quite amazing, both in the way it was written, and what it contained.
Also, when she read this line: And even though Emilee knew how mad she was at him..., she initially freaked because when she first read it, she read 'about him'. Oh, that would have been good too, though (:
I read it on myspace and I commented it on both sites But I figured I loved it so much, I might as well comment it on here too!! :D
This is probably one of my favorite chapters Even though Nick and Emilee pass notes and he walks her to work and all, but to me, that scene by the lockers and by the talent sign-ups was the real start of their relationship. And I think Emilee is getting a little bit of a crush on him, but of course she would never admit it to herself. But I think Nick has liked her since he first laid eyes on her. Ahh and Joe. He has a knack for interrupting special moments. Gah. hahaha :) I can't wait to see where you and Hannahuno are going with all of this :D
i'm waiting impatietly for the next update even though i just finished the last chapter that you had posted. haha. but either way please update soon! :]
One makes all the difference in the world. Think about it: how much has your life changed since I started coming here? And aren’t I just one measly deaf person?
First of all, thank you for using my banner! Second, that had to be my favourite scene. It reminds me of the phrase, "To the world, you may just be one person. To one person, you may be the world." It was so sweet and written with such love and empathy... it was so amazing. I love how you added the bridge into the chapter... it made me sigh with content.
Whoo! You updated! Yay! That brings me joy. I can see the relationshop progressing between Emilee and Nick; it's truly wonderful. But I'd be steamed too, if I was signed up to perform against my will. Wonderful, wonderful chapter.
This story is magical. You two seem to write so effortlessly with portraying emotions in words... it's amazing. I really like this, and look forward to see where it goes from here, =)
I made a banner.. Although its not as good as the others, I just wanted to make one. http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/DemiixxJB/Silencespeakslouderbanner.jpg
just read it.. Its INCREDIBLE! I even cried, when she was upset about her Dad.. But im probably just a sook LOL.. Considering its a sensitive subject.. Anyways, great great job!!! PLEASE PLEASE Update!!!
Truly amazing! Hannah, you did a splendid job on this chapter. Bow chicka wow wow. It seems a relationship is blooming. I'm looking forward to it. I loved it!
WHAT?! only a few more chapters? NOOOO! ::Ranting:
I literally just sat here for a whole minute, re-reading the first few paragraphs, wondering how she could see the clock and write the lyrics. Then I realized that she's deaf, not blind. I'm so stupid. (shakes head)
Nick half-smiled. "You play beautifully," he said. AWWW!
Have I ever told you how much I love the name Emilee? Well, I do :D
Emilee blushed and turned away after reading the words on his lips. She blushed. HEHE. :XD
She should have expected something like that from him, but he still caught her off gaurd. You spelled 'guard' wrong, but I'm pretty sure you know how to spell it, so I'm not going to tell you :P
And now I just realized that I just told you how to spell it. Once again, I'm so dumb.
When I lost my hearing, I fell into this pit of depression. Especially after..." she trailed off again before shaking her head, finding that particular sentence too much for her to say. NOW I WANT TO KNOW! ::Ranting:
She unlatched it carefully before setting the violin gingerly inside the velvet foam. There's that adjective again! AHAHA!
Emilee inhaled through her nose and closed her eyes. The images filled the space behind her eyelids, playing like a silent movie, but she didn't dare watched it. I'm marrying those two sentences. BRILLIANT!
"He left when I turned eight. The moment he found out I was losing my hearing, he apparently decided he couldn't handle it and left. I haven't heard from him or even about him in eight years." HOLY SHEET! AHHHHHHHHH! NOOOOO! MEAN, MEAN, DAD! GRRRRRRR. ::Ranting:
THE ENDING! OHMYGOSH! They were going to kiss weren't they?
AND WHAT HE SAID WAS SO TOTALLY HEART-MELTING!
GAHH.
YOU GUYS ARE ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT FOR COMING UP WITH THIS!
And just a note: I read a story about Helen Keller yesterday. It reminded me of this (:
P.S. I love the new layout :D
P.P.S. I posted this on Hannah's too, so some of it may be confusing to you.