Next Generation - Comments

Ridele:

I liked that.
It was sweet.
For some reason I could realluy see Billie going off in a day dream whilst Joey got really annoyed waiting for him to answer.
The ending was funny too. Well done.

Yeah i aggue! Great work :D :lol:

I liked that.
It was sweet.
For some reason I could realluy see Billie going off in a day dream whilst Joey got really annoyed waiting for him to answer.
The ending was funny too. Well done.

funny in some bits but i lyk it plz write more!!!

That was fun.

*dances in triangles*

This is great!
I think you should write more...:tehe:
I love it though!!

Wow that was awesome!!
Well written
If you write anymore stories like this feel free to let me know =D
xoxo

Huzzah for you! It was awesome, i luff it! :)

i love it

its kool! i love it!