wooooo whoop tht bitch's ass Aiden yea whoop tht ass, told u skanky Rebecca u was goin to get ur ass beat, yo she broke tht bitch's nose tho and knocked her ass unconscious ha and I wish tht bitch would tell the police becuz Aiden has proof tht u was the culprit, man I hate fucking Rebecca, Aiden should beat her ass one more time for like a warning or something and make sure she knows not to fuck with Aiden or her love life again and everytime Rebecca sees Aiden she would run scared like a little scary bitch, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
loving it, Aiden is back, was about to tell Danny til leave her alone but Danny shut tht idea down and told her everything tht had happened, i hope she believes him and once she sees the diary entry, tht bitch Rebecca is goin down fucking slut she deserves to die cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Comment swapper here. I'm not sure what kind of fan fiction this is but that doesn't really matter. First of all, I love the title. I think it really goes with the chapter. Aiden sure is a pistol. I would be pissed too! I think you're a great writer with a strong beginning. I saw no grammar or spelling mistakes so great job. Bravo!
Omg yes she is finally free, now it's time to face tht slutty bitch Rebecca, I'm sure tht once Aiden gets better and finds out the truth tht she will kick tht bitch's ass, I hope tht Aiden listens to Danny and hears his side of the story becuz it was never him it was always tht skank who sabatoage ur relationship with Danny becuz she wanted him and I hope u notice tht becuz if u dont thn u r too blinded by the dark side of the force too see tht bitch is a fucking Sith Lord and Danny is Yoda, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
i love this story but fuck Rebeeca and her slutty ass, bitch would have gotten her ass beat once i found her with my man bitch ur my friend and u r goin to sleep with him after i told u we were dating bitch get dropped on the fucking spot, ooooo i cant stand slutty ass hoes.....cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Hey! I got this story from comment swap, and I love the first chapter so far. It's a tad unrealistic that a guy would have to share a room with a girl, but I love it anyway because I know some sort of romance is gonna happen, and I love romances ;) Rebecca sounds like a fun character, I loved when she was like "Leave the toilet seat up or you'll have to sit on it." Haha. This looks like it's gonna be going somewhere great with a lot of drama, only one thing for improvement you could possibly add more description, but to be honest it's pretty good the way it is. Keep it up! :)
Helloooo, I'm here via comment swap. First off, I think this is a definitely interesting idea. I like where it's going so far, but I've got to say, I'm not all that fond of Rebecca. I do like the relationship with Danny,a nd hope it progress as it goes along. You've got a few grammar and spelling mistakes here and there, but nothing too major. I would suggest reading over it a little bit more. All in all, I really like this. Keep it up!
Helloooo, I'm here via comment swap. First off, I think this is a definitely interesting idea. I like where it's going so far, but I've got to say, I'm not all that fond of Rebecca. I do like the relationship with Danny,a nd hope it progress as it goes along. You've got a few grammar and spelling mistakes here and there, but nothing too major. I would suggest reading over it a little bit more. All in all, I really like this. Keep it up!
Helloooo, I'm here via comment swap. First off, I think this is a definitely interesting idea. I like where it's going so far, but I've got to say, I'm not all that fond of Rebecca.
Loved it :) Keep on rockin' girl ! And hope all goes well with your best friend. I think he'll realize soon enough that he shouldn't leave your friendship behind :)