yay! this is great. dont sell yourself too cheap, these first few chapters are awesome! i loved your last story and this one seems to be just as promising. *subscribes*
I really like the way you've started this off. You've given us the perfect amount of information. Enough to have it all make sense, but not droning along with every boring detail. So after this great intro I'm expecting a great story to come from it :) You've got me sold already. -subscribes-
:)
keep updating!