The Case of Dew Withreath - Comments

i think it's great! & i wouldn't have been able to tell at all either that you don't normally speak much english. it sounded wayyy better than one of my stories. haha. :mrgreen:

Wow, this is really great! If I didn't know that you didn't use English much, I wouldn't have been able to tell at all. There was like one minor gramatical error, but nothing to worry over. :mrgreen:

I cant wait to see where the plot goes! i hope you update soon