What The Devil Doesn't Know - Comments

I don't think anyone has read in awhile, which is cool. I never update, and I hated the beginning. But Now I'm in a creative writing class, and I'll be putting my material up on here.

I really didn't like what I had done with this story. It wasn't quite right, and I want it to be perfect, because it's my pet project. So if you liked anything about this story, read my new one. It's the same idea, without all the side stories and name dropping. It's going to focus a lot more on the relationship between Mickey and Kendall, whose name I changed to Hope.

I decided Hope was a better name because A) It's not my real name B) It's more ironic, and goes with the story. It kin of matches her character. Or at least it will

So thanks everyone! I Hope you read my new story, "The Joneses"! I think you will like it.

lalala
new loooooonnngggggg chapter up.
I'm going to update much more frequently now that summer has started!

So keep reading! :)
I promise, the story is starting to go somewhere.

And by the way, I updated the description section. I wish I had made it more of an intro, but whatever. I would like to know what you guys think :)

I UPDATED.
Nothing too interesting but everyone should go read it. lol

First update in FOREVER.
OMG I'm sorry. I doubt anyone still reads.

Whatever. I'm doing this for myself anyway. lol

I know this isn't a good thread for this question, BUTTTTT;

does anyone know a creative writing site SIMILAR to Mibba? I'm sick of looking for something halfway decent and only finding "OMG Gerard Way showed up at my door and now we're in love!"
Yawn.
I guess I need some variety...

^^^
I love you:)

UPDATE!
oooh:)

yess!
you updated.
ha, this is pretty much my favorite story on this whole website.
THANK YOU!

I updated!
For anyone who still reads that is.....
I'm so sorry that the updates take so long guys.
But like I said, school is a bitch.

Just know I'm working as fast as I can.
And a new chapter is up.
I really like it too. I really took my time trying to perfect it. I think it was worth the wait :D

Sorry the update took 46217645127645129537694 years guys.
:(
SCHOOL CAN SUCK A COCK :cheese:
All the homework...plus, I spend like, every spare moment I have with le boyfriend.

But it's up:)

why do you refuse to update.
it kills me inside.
a tear...

thank you:]
you guys motivate me to update and not keep it all in my head:]

you're awesome.

yay! hehe, yeah, i adore this story.

keep it coming, im kind of addicted.

BlackBloodRoses and Bruised_Heart are the coolest people on Mibba:D
haha
I write for you guys.

I'm such a loser, begging for comments. bahaha.
but seriously:(

comments are how I get feedback and know people are reading.
When I don't get comments I'm not motivated. So if anyone reads this, yeah.
haha.

suggestions on how to make people want to read your story?
thanksss:)
I love you guys:)

I like the story a lot! It's really good!

thank you:D

I've been working on this in my head for a while now.

I'm glad you like it:)

Its Really good. Carry on with it. I Don't understand why not many people are commenting. (None :oops: )
Luff it
Keep on going! *Subscribes :)*