Aw man, Tevan is adorable! And bad Brian! What a bad influence that man is .... But he's so damn pretty, it makes up for everything! lol
You know I loved this chapter and I can't wait for more. I really wish people commented more for this one. It's definitely worthy of a crapload of feedback =) Don't end it anytime soon, okay? Please?
Val was kinda being annoying. I think Katie still has every right to be mad. Zacky did a douchebag thing. At least everything seems okay for now. I cant wait read more!!!!
Absolutely amazing :D I'm glad she hasn't totally forgiven him, especially after he started checking out that blonde bimbo!! && LOL @ the petting zoo incident! But yeah, brilliant as always! :D xxx
haha yea i dont think i can end a story bad either...and even if i could, i wouldn't...i get in such a bad mood if a story has a bad ending....like in this one zacky story, him and a girl got married and then he divorced her because he cheated on her and wanted to be with that girl....i was like....well, that was lovely (can't you just smell the sarcasm? lol) and i was in a shitty mood for the rest of the week.