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pearl. (100)

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Even though you already know I love it I think I should leave a comment.

I love it so much!
*hugs you really tight*

November 24th, 2008 at 09:29pm

Heruna (100)

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lol, I aggree with GothicKaoru, you can relate to the main character. It's not the best story I've ever read, but I've read some painfully amazing stories..
Overall I think it's good, you should keep writing (:

November 22nd, 2008 at 05:10pm

jamekid (100)

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Awe thanks. I call it like my brain see's it.

i liked the crazy clapping guy,
he had no significance here.

November 22nd, 2008 at 05:13am

Panthera Alces (105)

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I think your lead character was easy to relate to. And I could just picture her with gun in her bag... Scottie was pretty awsome too. My feedback isnt so great, I know.

November 22nd, 2008 at 04:47am