Salvation - Comments

You are a fantastic writer. It all just comes to life, I really love this story.
<3

God, poor Rory.
But poor Wil too.
I wonder where he's at.
Will Brian try to make a move now?
What about Ronnie?
*sighs* So many questions...I hope Wil comes back. lol.

oooh, left and vulnerable!

Aw poor Rory. What will her and Brian talk about?? Upate soon please.

awwwww....
how could he leave her?
i hope he comes back soon.
=(
cant wait for more!

Oh my! What's she gonna do? Update soon please.

kicked ass!

the last update was SOOO GOOD!!!! ACK!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!

Yay for Rory, Ronnie, Wil, and Brian. Brian and Ronnie didn't die and Wil and Rory didn't get hurt. Awesome update. Can't wait for more.

Ooh, theres a new Alpha in town!
I seriously don't think they'll keep their word.
How else are they going to prove their not afraid of Wil or Brian.
So...who is Ronnie going to follow?
Thats not the right word but my brain can't think of the correct one right now.

oooh, is ronnie gonna die?!

So Ronnie chose to fight on his own. I hope he kicks that vampires ass. lol. Great update as always. (: Can't wait for more.

LMAO scared puppies XD

Noooo it's not Ronnie vs Brian. lol
It's Ronnie vsone of Dmitri's vamps

*gasp*
ronnie vs brian!!
awesome update!
i love this story!

I knew it! Ronnie is going to do the fighting. I wasn't really shocked at Rory's suggestion because everyone was acting like scared puppies. Nor was I surprised at Brian's and Wil's reaction at Rory's helpful comment. Heh, what a way to get someone to step up to the plate. Thanks for the awesome update.

Loved the update. Can't wait to see what happens.
More soon please.

Oh damn!
One wolf agains the Dark Knights?
I wonder who it'll be...I don't know if they want the Alpha's forfiting their spot.
So....is Ronnie the one who is going to do the fighting?
The reasoning behind my guess is because the other's were instigating him on the plane.
I loved the updates!

Poor Bri Bri. I bet he is going to make Ronnie fight. :/ great update.

Ohh so Brian has a brother? I like the update. Obviously they just want Brian to die...update soon please.

Ronnie does not need crap from them...or at least I hope he doesn't. And it is so like a guy to want to race..lol. Loved the update and love where this story is heading. Can't wait for more.