I was randomly on your story page because I wanted to see if Work Tongue had had any comments (because I was too lazy to check before :cheese:) and I found this.
Ooh.
:weird
I like.
I was going to write something like this, some time, but meh. You wrote it way better than I could have :tehe:
Well first of all the opening lines were amazing. As soon as I read it then I knew it was going to be awesome.
And I like that Sean's all cuddly and cute with Ian. It's so bloody sweet!
I just tried to quote paragraphs and paragraphs, but it looked silly, so I shall just refer to the whole section of Lee losing his virginity to Stu as being bloody hilarious and well-written. :XD
Oh, and Rhys and Gavin? I think you just summed up their relationship with these few words: The two of them were shameless. You can just totally imagine it. :weird
And then you feel all sorry for poor Aled. I just want to give him a hug at that stage.
And then when Gavin announced the group dare, Aled got to kiss Rhys! And it made me so happy. :lmfao
And also, the line shortly before this happened, "orgy on the Lewis's floor" or something like that, was amazing. Heh. :yah
And ooh? Shay nearly threw Joel onto the sofa, the pair practically screaming for each other as young busy lips parted and craved the other. Hell yes.
And oh dear, the last line. Time to play with the big boys
Ahh. I love it when Ian and Sean are all cute together. It's the best thing in the entire world or fanfiction. Welsh fanfiction anyways.
I get really angsty when Sean and Ian are with other people in stories. :tehe: Even our joint ones it seems weird to not have Sean with Ian.
Wish I was at that gathering... with my camera... filming them all snogging...
Lee lost his virginity to Stu though. :lmfao That's actually amazing. :XD In Ian's house of all places.
And then Sean brings on the awws being the good little boyfriend he is and kissing him. So cute! :cute:
And... NAPALM JAMIES HAIR!!! Total awesomeness. But... now more Goff Jamie. ;_;
I also thought it was sweet that Aled wanted to be with Rhys, and just grabbed him at the end when everyone started making out. Good for him! :XD
a drunken smile on his face as he even spread out his arms, basking in imaginary glory at his words. :lmfao Yes. He would do that. :lmfao
Then everyone goes at it. I think. Punk Lee and Goff Jamie. Are the second best couple there to make out. After Sean and Ian that is.
And of course Sean would rather fuck Ian than glass. Glass hurts. And then they go. And fuck. Which is always nice. And sweet that Ian hadn't wanted to push it.
But... now it's Sean's time to play with the big boys. :tehe:
WOW.
I'm so mad at you right now for ending it there. SO MAD!
Makes me wish my guy friends would do something like that. ^_^
This is the best oneshot ever. My favorite.
You better win that damn contest!
xoxo.