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  • Sweet Denial

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    Okay not going to say the same things I said on the other review I've left, so I'll just say that I really liked this one. Very angsty but real, makes me wonder if you've known someone who's either succeeded in or attempted suicide. I really would love to slaughter Jeff and Kyler's Mom though, they're way too fucked up to live. I wish you'd have foreshadowed Kyler's mentality a bit more, but it's not as thrown together as in All The Little Pieces.
    December 30th, 2007 at 11:54am
  • robby_is_robby

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    I cannot stop reading this story. I love it. Abolutely love it
    June 12th, 2007 at 01:37am
  • Romping Rainbows

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    that was sad.
    but i like it.
    :) :D
    June 8th, 2007 at 09:19am
  • Lucy In The Sky

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    i'm mindfucked... even more after reading this.. -________-
    it's still good though. hopefully there will be more soon
    June 8th, 2007 at 02:50am
  • The Fuck-Up

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    Aww so sad but so happy.
    Cute.
    More homie?
    June 8th, 2007 at 12:32am
  • dude_dudette

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    well it's about time they got together haha
    June 6th, 2007 at 11:15am
  • The Fuck-Up

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    So sad Lana.
    Hopes it gets happy soon.
    You are such a good writer homie.
    June 5th, 2007 at 07:23pm
  • Unicorn.

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    I love Sonny xD Wonder what he says?
    June 5th, 2007 at 01:41pm
  • Ms. Mothersound

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    omg i need to no wat sonny says!!!
    June 5th, 2007 at 07:41am
  • biggest_mistake

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    Cutting is BAD, Kyler.

    Bad.

    Bad bad boy.
    Don't do that.

    :( More soon?
    June 5th, 2007 at 04:38am
  • biggest_mistake

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    Yay! Kyler and JD are together. :D

    That makes me happy.

    Only now Liam needs to kill Jeff. Seriously.

    Loved the update :) More?
    June 5th, 2007 at 04:11am
  • dude_dudette

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    I think It's a really well written story. I love it.
    June 4th, 2007 at 02:01am
  • Romping Rainbows

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    omfg. i like this. [: please update soon...? ^_^
    June 3rd, 2007 at 10:57am
  • Your Addiction

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    Ugh, so much depression and angst... I mean, it's really well written and I love it. Update soon?
    June 3rd, 2007 at 10:21am
  • biggest_mistake

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    MORE WOMAN MORE!!!
    June 3rd, 2007 at 05:25am
  • Ms. Mothersound

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    wow i love this! you can really bend a story around someone's mind.
    but....
    WHY???!!! WHY DID YOU KILL SONNY??!!! WHYYYYYYY???????
    okay...im done. *tear* jk *hugs*
    June 2nd, 2007 at 06:20pm
  • biggest_mistake

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    This story is freaking amazing.
    More soon, please?
    Lots more...
    June 1st, 2007 at 11:48pm
  • Sailor Meranda

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    Its still great! Still loving it!
    June 1st, 2007 at 10:58pm
  • Sailor Meranda

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    Loved the update...it was sad, but I liked it a lot...
    June 1st, 2007 at 09:15pm
  • Sailor Meranda

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    Like it a lot...
    June 1st, 2007 at 03:00am
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