although that was kinda gross it was great! I love the dresden dolls, my favorite band of all time! although 'missed me' is one of my least favorite dolls songs this was still great. (my favorite is 'night at roses')
i dont care if this topic has been inactive for thirty days or not. this is important. okay. first off I LOVE THE DRESDEN DOLLS. ok, moving on.
secondly, that was perhaps the most amazingly disturbing thing i have ever read. part of me kept thinking "ok, stop reading, this is upsetting" and then the rest of me was like "nononogottakeepgoing" which is a good thing, btw, it means that you had my attn and your writing was def. effecting me. so props.
DO NOT ever worry on your talent, bc you got it. and you got alot. that was beautifully written and while it was a one-shot, i could def. see it turning into a fully developed story. your character was developed and the narration was...this sounds so corny but, haunting. do you have any more stories based on songs?
AMAZING.
your story + me reading it =
LOVE IT.