Wow... your story was amazing. I really enjoyed reading it :) However in the end i kinda of felt it needed somthing else. perhaps like a peek into the future to see if Vi could change destiny or something like that. But other than that I really liked it.:) Cheers!
Well everyone has said it but the ending was a shocking. What happens know? and their battle was weak i through she would have used that angel powers she had but you never brought that back in the story either. Im not trying to be mean im just sayin it wasnt as exciting at the end like i thought it would have been
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU CAN'T JUST END THE STORY LIKE THAT. IT'S TOOO GOOOD. THERE SHOULD BE A SEQUEL. BUT I WASN'T SURPRISED THAT SHE GOT PREGO. IT HAD A CLIFFHANGER AS AN ENDING, WHICH SUCKED, BUT WAS STILL GOOD.
Brilliant story... except for the ending xD no offense, but it was just.. dropped. Like there is supposed to be at least a little more to your story. A sequel would be nice =D Overall... TIE THE LOSE ENDS!!!
*shakes you like a mad girl* WOMAN! You left me with a cliff hanger!!!!!! *turns nice* write more please =] (sour patch teen sour sweet then finishes comment and is gone lol)