Hijacked on Reality - Comments

I just came across this story once it got finished today.
It was really awesome, and I enjoyed reading it =D

Because my comments usually fail and tend to be one or two words I'm gonna try and make this comment better :P

This story is brilliant and I don't know why more people haven't read it, they seriously should! The ending was so sad and at first I thought one of the band members had died... then I realised they hadn't and it made me happy :P BHAAHHA, and the part about handing out razor blades was great.

The ending was SO FUCKING ADORABLE.
"We're going to be perfect."
Awwwwww. *Cuddles them both* I'm so glad they were okay in the end!

Okay, I'm gonna stop ranting not.
Oh and the last part you said about the band finding this made me laugh ['cause i'm cool like that]. :P

I don’t know why people called funerals ‘celebrations of someone’s life’.

OHSHIT. Someone's dead. No. No. Nononononono.
See, I love this story so much it makes me swear. :tehe:
And yes, I did know someone was going to die, but I had barred that from my mind because I was scared who it was going to be. :XD

I was tempted to start handing around razors and see who brightened up.
:lmfao DO IT DANNY.
I mean, no. That's bad. -wags finger-

I stared across the room at Brendon. He was standing beside Ryan, softly talking to him, fingers sliding over his cheek in a loving manner. They were perfect for each other, so in love.
OH MY GOD. I thought it said Brenton and I was so horrified.
THEY'RE SO GORGEOUS. (Yeah, going to be abusing the caps lock button. :file: )
Oh my God, they're so freaking cute. :cute: :arms: :arms:

Oh right. This is Brenton's POV. :shifty

I’d learnt so much about the values of relationships from living with them, and grown the childlike belief of ‘a perfect romance’.
Ohmy.

Brendon remarked, cocking his head to one side as he analysed me.
Bden cocking his head = adorable.
Actually, just Bden=adorable.
:arms:
AND HE IS SO RIGHT.
BRENNY, GO MARRY DAN.
JEEZ.

“That’s it, you arrogant prick.” Brendon snarled.
Even when he's angry, adorable. I love how he's all defensive of his Ryry. :tehe: (Well, maybe defensive isn't the right word. But whatever.)

OH FUCK. RYAN'S DEAD?!

SHIT ON A FUCKING STICK.

He broke off as a choked sob escaped his throat, tears now breaking away from his face and falling to the floor.
Bden! :cheese:
LIZZIE YOU ARE SO SADISTIC. (In a terribly good way. :tehe:)

There was Brenton, sitting on my doorstep, knees pulled up to his chest, looking off into the distance.
:brightside: NOW MAKE LOVE, 'KAY?

“Are we going to be okay?”
Yes!! :cheese:

“We’re going to be perfect.”
:cheese:cheese:cheese:cheese

LIZZIE

THAT WAS WONDERFUL

And I shall stop speaking in caps now :tehe:

I loved it! I think the ending is freaking perfect. Just... no words. :arms: :arms: :arms:

And I, in the height of my idiocy, never actually got his home address.
Goodness, doesn't Dan realise your pain of trying to find a reason? If he'd just got Brenty's address, everything would be fine and dandy. But OHNOOOO.

Brendon and Ryan; that it was hell on earth and would only drive me away.
yeah, because they're too freaking cute for mortal minds. :file:

I’m starting to think that he was just ashamed of me.
AWW. :arms: The mental image of being a lost puppy is kicking in again.

Ben said he was probably just going through menopause, I didn’t find that funny.
Yeah, me either. :shifty -cough-

I just… I can’t understand. Everything was so perfect that morning.
:arms: :arms: :arms:

drooled over the sadistic hotness that was Dexter.
LMFAO AHAHAHAHAHA :lmfao

“Jesus fuck, could you be anymore depressing?”
:tehe: Ah, good ol' Benny boy.

Shizen, I really really want some clinkers now. Really badly. o____o;

I pouted… in a manly way…
LMFAO. Sure, Dan. I believe you. :file:

“You can either have these… or Brenton’s current location.”
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD.
yeah, I didn't gasp out loud when I read that or anything. :shifty

Fuck, TV messes with your attention span.
That is so TRUE. My God. -shakes fist- Especially if GD are on the TV at the current time. :file:

“Well… yes. But we’ll just say I’m awesome and leave it at that, hey?”
That is so sweet. :cheese: :cheese:

He was really here…
If he's not (I am highly suspiscious of you after last chapter Lizzie.) I will kill you.

red Gibson Les Paul Studio
:yah -want-

“I don’t care.”
LIAR! IF YOU DON'T CARE THEN WHY ARE YOU HERE GOING INSANE OVER YOUR GUITAR INSTEAD OF SLOBBERING ALL OVER DAN'S FACE?!

“You can’t.”
BAH SHIT FUCK FUCK FUCK.

“I can’t…”
Well, that's a slight improvement. BUT STILL. :cheese:

I love the chapter. And GOD NEXT CHAPTER PLZZZZZ. :tehe:

D:
Awwwwww.

okay i so cant trump alisons comment though i do second everything she said.
hmm what to write, what to write.

firstly, i love the new banner, congrats alison, i need photoshop fer sure.

Brenton couldn’t win one at the carnival, no matter how hard he tried, so on the way home he stopped off and bought me one.
haha he sucks lol, no not really.

No, I have no idea how he knew the location of a 24 hour pet shop.
do we really have one? who would need to buy pets 24 hours of the day... well except brenton and dan lol

“Nothing… just trying to tattoo the image of you into my mind so I don’t go crazy missing you.”
aww that is too cute

“I’ll miss you harder.”
ill tell you whats harder ;D

I hissed as his hand wrapped around my cock,
pfft and you say im crude for saying im gonna f**k someone

He seemed odd… distant.
HE'S IN LOVE WITH YOU DANN, DUH
lol just kidding... or am i?

“BULLSHIT.” I jumped at his sudden outburst.
pssh ben couldnt scare a fly haha

I saw you on the couch fucking that blond piece of shit.
*grumbles* dont call b-piz that

I didn’t know how to fix it, and… I needed him.
aww too cute, even though its a sad situation

I get that you were scared to tell me, but I thought you also knew me well enough to know that I would have at least heard you out!”
god how many times have you said similar shit to me, well the second half atleast

“Henry and Darcy were here. But when you didn’t show after half an hour, Darcy suddenly remembered he had to return a library book and Henry thought he left the stove on. In other words, they fucked off, literally.”
haha so shifty, now when i see them i totally think of things like this.

“Lisa know yet?”
well i do now!!! hahaha

“Yeah, she dumped his ass. Darcy’s kissing it better.”
i would never!!!‘You’re so not the person I thought you were. Don’t ever fucking talk to me again.’
i know that that is gonna come up wrong but thats how you wrote it, just letting you know hunny. and ARGH like i said earlier, stupid people and assuming things.

update soon-ish or whenever you can or no sex for you
ILY haha dont hurt me

No, I have no idea how he knew the location of a 24 hour pet shop.
:lmfao How very sweet of him.

Tonight, I was beyond content lying half on top of the blond on my couch watching a Passions marathon.
!!! :XD Passions, :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao

He kissed me again and whispered ‘it’s okay’ over and over.
Aw, even while he's, y'know, he's still so sweet. Next chapter will be their wedding, y/y?

When I had calmed down sufficiently, Brenton grabbed some tissues, cleaning me up before snuggling down on the couch with me once more.
Even cleaning up, he's farkin' gorgeous! :arms:

I think I’m falling.
I think I've fallen. :lmfao

I woke up that morning in the most peaceful mood. Brenton had his arms wrapped tightly around me, his head tucked into my neck.
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.

“I’m late for band prac!”
Ahahaha, he calls it prac. Ben's going to be angry!

“How can LYING to me be what’s best? I get that you were scared to tell me, but I thought you also knew me well enough to know that I would have at least heard you out!”
Awww poor Bennikins! :arms: And poor Danny boy. :arms:

"It’s called freedom of will, princess.”
HE CALLS HIM PRINCESS!

:weird

In other words, they fucked off, literally.
:lmfao AHAHAHAHA. Although I can't really see them being together. :coffee:

“Yeah, she dumped his ass. Darcy’s kissing it better.”
:tehe:

OH MY GOD. :omfg: HE SAW HIM KISS BEN DIDN'T HE. JESUS CHRIST. NO NO NO NO NO NO. My face literally fell when I saw that. JESUS CHRIST.

Next chapter, plz. :don:

this is bloody great! :D

I’m not usually a flamboyant gay, but right now…
DAN IS SUCH A LIAR. :file:

I had NOTHING to wear for my date!

:lmfao, I can just imagine him standing there aying that, doing the gay-handflick-thing.

BAHA DARNEY. :brightside: Atfirst i thought it said Barney, and I got very confused.

He has Sonic boxers. I want them xD

I finally decided on a pair of dark blue skinny legs, red cowboy boots, black tee with Marilyn Munroe, my hero, on it and a grey vest.
Sure Dan, you're not flamboyant at ALL.

“Not really, well… I spose, it’s roomy, but still cosy if you get what I mean.”
Heh. Hehehehe. Hehehehehe. -conitnues on for quite some time- :weird

I jerked back violently towards the door, bashing my shoulder against the hard metal.
:don: Poor Dan. -hugs him- He's so adorable ;0; :arms:

“Okay, this is soooo not how I wanted this thing to go. So can we please start over? Hi, I’m Brenton, I shall be your date tonight.” He took a bow and held out his hand.
I smiled at his bent over stance. He raised his head slightly and looked at me questioningly. I grabbed his hand.
“How do you do Sir Brenton? I would be delighted to have you as my date tonight.”
:lmfao, we totally just did that. Except minus the date part.

She stood there hissing at me with her hands in the air like claws until she got bowled over by a purple and green coloured swirl.
I can so see you doing that. :coffee:

As I had suspected, it had been Alison, Lizzie’s friend, dressed like the Mad-Hatter…
:brightside:brightside:brightside :arms:

To be honest, this kind of thing was more common than you would think. Idiots.
:tehe: we should take up this hobby.

“Doubtful. Her diet today has consisted of green sprinkles and tea.”
Oh, you know me so well. :tehe:


“Pfft. My ass he’s ‘a friend’. If he’s a friend then by all rights I should be doing Alison right now.”
“AAAAGGGGHHHH BAD MENTAL IMAGES!! BAD!!!! GET THEM OUT!!!! GET THEM OUUUUTTTTT!!!!”
:lmfao xD xD xD

I leaned back into Brenton’s embrace as his arms circled my body.
:cute: Gawd, they are so cuuuuute.

As long as Brenton was holding my hand, rubbing my fingers softly every so often, I’d follow him anywhere.
Awwwww. Same comment as above. xD

I felt his lips on my neck and whimpered. I knew that I was shaking and I could feel my eyes pricking with tears as I scrunched them shut.
omgno: I just want to hug him!

“Dan? Danny?”
THEY SHOULD GET MARRIED.

Brenton was silent for a few moments before whispering “Tell me.”
SEE?!

Ben kept telling me that it was natural and not that I was enjoying it, but I still felt so ashamed.
Gawd. i need to squish him with hugs and never stop. :arms:

He started running his hand through my hair and whispering into it about a million apologies.
Bah! He is so sweet. And sexy. And made for Dan. :cute:

“TO THE AQUARIUM!”
:lmfao

OMG THIS CHAPTER IS FOR ME!? I LOVE YOU! :arms: :cheese: :XD :brightside: :arms: :tehe: :arms: :brightside: :cheese: :cheese: :cheese:

hahahaahahahahahahaha
i laughed so hard,
OMG MASS ORGY!!! 5 guys and 2 girls lol!!!

they are so a cover up band.
and you can tell the fictional version of TSF that i have no problems with it.
i love this chapter haha

Benjamin cannot cook for himself you see, so he usually pops in for at least breakfast and dinner.
Aw, ickle Ben. I like how you used his full name here. :file:

“The other guys should be here soon. Dumbasses are always late.”
:lmfao

...staring at the batter covered spatula as if it was some sort of alien artifact
BAHAHA, I can so see him doing that. :lmfao :lmfao

“I will when you leave your prick out of Lisa!”
Gawd, I think I'm dying of laughter. xD

“NO PANCAKES FOR YOU!!”
Hahahaha, Soup Nazi! :tehe:

I nodded at him and waited for the peck on the lips he always gave me.
;;P :brightside:

“GOD YOU ARE SO GAY DARCY!”
“BISEXUAL ACTUALLY YA HETERO!”
Lmfao! (Is he really bi, by the way?)

“You kidding me? Hearing your voice is the only way I want to wake up in the morning.”
aw.

“YEAH I’LL GET HIM! HOLD YA FUCKING FAERIES!”
Bahh you spelt it the right way!!! :arms: I LOVE YOU!

Henry grabbed a fistful of Darcy’s hair and flipped them, making the pair fall of the table and smash down onto the floor, taking one of the chairs down with them.
Oh my goodness. Does Lisa know about this? xD

“We should not be watching this.”
No Dan, really you should. ;;P

“How did I miss that sexual tension?!”
:lmfao :lmfao

I should call Lizzie, she’d give him the attention he’s missing out on…
AHAHAHAHA, couldn't resist, could you? xD

Though I’m not sure whether or not Lizzie and Lisa would be pissed, they both have things for gay guys, so ya know…
:tehe:

“Why are there coco-pops in my laundry?”
GOD LOL. Perfect ending :lmfao

Well, there's your proper comment. (Can I be in the storyyyyy? )

“He’s not my boyfriend.”
“I know. He’s so obviously hetero it hurts my eyes.”
lololololololololololololololololololololololol

i can picture this whole chapter in my head,
the venue setting is john curtin hahahaha.

very good, i shall now laugh and blush profusely when i see them on the 2nd

and again *saves link to show dan, brenton and ben*
i may just print it out haha

"Blond bombshell" - lololol.

“Hey.” I opened my eyes and looked around for the source of the whisper. I sat up straighter as I noticed Brenton sliding around the corner, looking around warily before sitting next to me on the couch.
Ahaha, he sounds so creepy-stalkerish.

“Call me when you can.”
-melts-

“Either you came better prepared for this romp than I thought, or your phone is ringing.”Oh God, lol. :lmfao

“I know. He’s so obviously hetero it hurts my eyes.”
:lmfao :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao

haha i sooooooo agree with alison,
though i wouldnt know if they were both 'deliciously gay', i've never met them lol
you should make yourself go out with ben

*saves link to site to show dan on friday*

Ah, god, I love this. I can just picture in my head, they're both so very deliciously gay

Write more *-*

Brenton is so... :yah

You should make yourself go out with Ben :file: