My Heart Is The Worst Kind of Weapon - Comments

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the American economy sucks.

Amen to that.

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Gustav was small.

*sigh* Story of the poor kid's life.

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“Hi,” Gustav smiled shyly, barely picking his head up from the desk.

Aw :cute: That just sounds incredibly adorable to me.

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“OHAI WASSUP!” Hannah jumped.

:twitch: SHE SPEAKS MY LANGUAGE! :twitch:

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I can’t make it obvious, not again.

Dr. Savannah senses some underlying plot here...

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Usually we swap playlists and shit so that way we aren’t listening to Samy Deluxe or Nena twenty-four-seven.

Bahahaha, that's epic.

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Mr. Schwartz walked in and began class.

I use 'Schwarz' and 'Schwartz' too, a lot.
>.>
<.<
@_@
Don't tell anyone.
Chapter 2:

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“You’re another one of those emo freaks,” He spat. He grabbed my gray scarf by the ends and pulled tightly. I can’t believe this. This guy is trying to kill me! He finally let go of my scarf, leaving me red in the face and gasping for air. He struck me in the face with his fist, allowing my nose to drip blood.

Of course. *rolls eyes* People can never leave other people alone.

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“WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING?!” I yelled at him.

GUSTAV TO THE RESCOOOOOO!!

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“Psh. I’m so afraid of the little mouse who never t—“ His words were cut off by a fist to his face and a foot to his stomach. He lay on the floor in pain as I looked at Kari. She had fear in her eyes. I grabbed her by the hand and sat her down on a bench as I ran into the bathroom and got paper towels. When I walked back out, she was still there, clutching her legs close to her body, still whimpering. I sat down next to her and started wiping the blood off her face with the towels.

GOD! Even I'm getting pissed off at this Tyler kid and he's not even real!
Chapter 3:

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First of all, it's Tom.

And that right there is reason enough to run screaming from the room with your hands over your head.

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"Hey, sexy Peanut Butter!"

Uh...not gonna ask :XD
Chapter 4:

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"Oh cool. I'm heading to Bill's. Staying the night there."

Now kids, don't be naughty.

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"I'm not sure. Is there like a mall in Germany?" I asked, confused

No, there are no malls in Germany. Kidding. Kiddding. Sarcasm is my second language.

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"Much cheaper than Hot Topic."

Everything is cheaper than Hot Topic :XD
Chapter 5:

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“How did you know?” I shouted at them.

Gustav shouts?! :cheese: ALERT THE MEDIA!!
Chapter 6:

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Uhm. Nein, danke. I'm not much of a dancer."

Boo.

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"I'd like to see those moves somewhere else." A thickly accented voice whispered in her ear.

:cheese:

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"Why is he here!?" Bill asked with anger.

I was just going to ask the same thing >.>

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"You've seen what I can do. Now, let go of her!" He yelled

Hell yeah. Martial arts Gustav strikes.
Chapter 7:

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-Time Elapse-

Uh...actually, it's time 'lapse'. Sorry, I'm just peevish about that kind of stuff :XD

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"I- I keep having this reoccurring dream of my ex. H-he was abusive." She took a deep breath, trying to hold back her tears, then continued, "One day when I went to his house, he was home alone. I went downstairs and it was pretty dark. I figured he was playing video games or something. But when I turned the l-lights on, he was just standing there with a knife and, h-he -" her words cut off, tears started welling in her eyes again - "He tried killing me." She sobbed.

:cheese: *le gasp*

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She lay down on the couch beside me as I wrapped my arm around her. She had finally stopped crying again and fell asleep in my arms.

Aw :cry: How sweet.

Major long review is fail. Sorry :/

Oh my goodness!
Kari, I love this! Gustav is veeeery protective :D
Please write more soon!

i love the updates!!!! haha and why is his name tyler? haha do you hate him that much?

OH
Mien
Gott
YOU SLEPT IN HIS ARMS!!!!! :tehe:
I love it
More soon ja?

seven: Guessing that everybody, or some, stayed at the twins house. Loved how cute, romantic, and caring this chapter was of Kari and Gustav. Wondering what will happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.

six: Loving how fearless Gustav is; hope Kari gets some backbone later on in the story; she's too quiet for me at least. Loving this the more that I read it. Wondering what will happen next? Will they dance with each other now? Can't wait to read the next chapter.

five: Hope you had fun in Florida. Wishing I could dye my hair the same color; oh well, I love the color that I have. Wondering what will the guys say when they see Kari? Can't wait to read and find out.

four: Still loving this. Wondering what will happen at the party? Love the outfit that they picked out. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

three: Still liking this. Wondering what is going to happen tomorrow and at the party? Can't wait to read and find out.

two: How cool would it be to actually have a vengeance locker number? Anyways; the story, liking it right now. I found some small mistakes, so nothing to worry about...

~Gustav has all the same classes as me, so he would pass me notes telling me telling me what the teachers were saying.} just take out the second telling me.

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

one: Came to read this one as well. Anyways; the story, sounds interesting. Wondering what will happen during the rest of the day and at the party later on. Can't wait to start reading the rest of this.

FINALLY!
ive been waiting....
wait. what happened to the warheads?
aww i really like tht scene tho. its cute

yea!
an actually update!

I love you for updating. :cute:

That was really good.
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more soon, ja?

yay! :D Finally girlie! and all your worrying was for nothing, the chapter was good, I told you it would be!

So more updates coming soon I hope lol

Oh,yay. :cute:
you did take my advice.
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:arms:
can't wait for more, honig.

NONONONONONONONONONONONONO!!!!!!
NEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN!!!
u cant go on haitus on this story too!!!!!!!
please Kari!!!!
ps. my slushi needs have been fulfilled!

OMFG KARISSA
UVE HAD THIS WRITTEN FOREVER
I SHOULD KNOW
UR LUCKY I HAVENT HURT U YET!
thanks for the update!
next one bitte
i know u have it >.> <.< ^.^ v.v <.> >.<

FINALLY! ahh it was about time for this update...and it was great missy, gotta love Gusti as your knight in shining armor :D

so no more writer's block now? lol I hope

Loved the update kiddo
:tehe:
Gussi saved you!!!
More soon ja?