In A Heartbeat Mr.Rockstar - Comments

well, it looks nice but you should check your grammamar, its horribible!!!

I think this story would sound awesome!!! =D

you need to use actual words you can't use like 'IM' speak but it seems interesting i hope you update it

ohhhhhhhh i like it please update

Sounds Good

Update please :) Aww Nick made Destiny fall lol I like how in one of the clothes pictures in ch.3 has milk and cookies xD haha

Okay listen, you can't use chatspeak. And don't overload the story with pictures, because then it gets annoying. You have to actually use spell check and spell out the entire word, like 2 = to, r = are, etc.