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  • The Daydreamer

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    well, it looks nice but you should check your grammamar, its horribible!!!
    July 26th, 2010 at 03:46am
  • annaberry96

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    I think this story would sound awesome!!! =D
    December 29th, 2009 at 02:24pm
  • LeT_ThE_rAiN_cOmE

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    you need to use actual words you can't use like 'IM' speak but it seems interesting i hope you update it
    December 25th, 2009 at 04:45am
  • Beverley123

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    ohhhhhhhh i like it please update
    December 20th, 2009 at 09:47pm
  • Somebody.To.Love.Me

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    Sounds Good
    August 28th, 2009 at 06:53pm
  • Nuff_Said

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    Update please :) Aww Nick made Destiny fall lol I like how in one of the clothes pictures in ch.3 has milk and cookies xD haha
    June 23rd, 2009 at 11:00pm
  • the apex predator;;

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    Okay listen, you can't use chatspeak. And don't overload the story with pictures, because then it gets annoying. You have to actually use spell check and spell out the entire word, like 2 = to, r = are, etc.
    April 6th, 2009 at 04:43pm
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