She Wants Revenge - Comments

Oh Jeeze.
I can tell you're going to be trouble for my ego.
I love it though!
hahah thank you SOOO much.
I'm sosos happy you're enjoying the story!
And, no. you're definitly not the only one.
I think he's...ridiculously attractive. Like, beyond belief.
And most of my friends do too, lol.
But I'm not a wonderful judge because I've always been into, erm, "older" men.
(that doesn't make me sound strange, does it? hahah)

And, I'll keep that in mind.
Do I have to do the whole <br> thing like on myspace?
gah. sososo bad at computer lingo.

BUTTTT,
thank you again SOOOO much for your kind words!

oh my gee. i miss the original team too!!! *sob*
although i have to admit, the new team is highly amusing. like Kutner, with that whole 'paddles' obsession? that makes me laugh. i hate the stupid lying cheating plastic surgeon though. he's SO annoying...
but right, back to the point.
AWESOME chapter! hahaha. seriously. i LOVE the dialogue. most writers on mibba tend to veer away from it because it's difficult to create naturally flowing conversations, but i love yours! they're fantastic! lol, honestly, you've got House down pat. i can't help but think that this would be a GREAT episode of the actual show =]
um hey...quick question...i'm not the only one who thinks House is actually incredibly attractive, am i?

oh, and i think what And the Strings means is for indents in the paragraphs. or to leave a space between each new one (kind of like what i just did above)...i think. it's just because your chapters do tend to lean on the longer side - which is a great thing, because i love them so much- but having a huge chunk of text all close together is a little overwhelming and hard on the eyes. it's up to you though, because it might be difficult to make it easier to read with so much dialogue-driven action.
it doesn't matter =] i'll still read it! i love this story already <3

haha. thank you!
Yes, I miss the original team as well. Nothing beats those ducklings.

Butttt, what do you mean about the spaces? Sorry. I'm slightly stupid when it comes to the whole, typing,computer,et al sort of thing.

hahaha, nice!

I miss Cameron.
=[
AND CHASE.
otherthanthatpointlessfact...
kudos!
the only suggestion I have is maybe put more
spaces in the paragraphs? Its easier for my old
granny eyes to follow. Not to sound self centered. *twitch*

hahah awww! thank you!
Yeah, I watch House absolutely everyday of my life lmao.
I've got the dialogue down in some places, but idk. I'm still a little iffy on it. But thank you so much!
And yeah, I'll try and keep it as medically acurate as possible, I've been doing tons of research. =]
But I'm not a doctor so don't know how it's going to pan out, lol.

thanks so much!
<3

yay first comment! =D i feel special...

ok, i am a die-hard House fan. i watch that show religiously, and i can honestly say that you've got the whole House dialogue down! it's funny. not enough banter, but i'm pretty sure that's because of the distracting *ahem* activities. hahaha. hopefully you keep it medically accurate, because that would be really staying true to the good old House format.
but i can't wait to see what happens!