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  • NeroKruga

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    Wow, I think I should try to rewrite this story.. Can't believe I was 13 when I attempted to write this.
    August 7th, 2013 at 11:19am
  • NeroKruga

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    Hopefully the next chapter will b better
    December 29th, 2008 at 08:58pm
  • NeroKruga

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    Thanx
    December 10th, 2008 at 11:09pm
  • Mystic Dreamer

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    hey it's a good start. got a lot of potential but you lost me here and there

    Overall really good
    December 8th, 2008 at 08:55pm
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