July 30th, 2009 at 05:51am
TORI!! Why are the old people worried about gettin' it on? Please don't subject us to old-people sex. Its scary....
Your writing's good...a bit stiff in some places, but quite entertaining.
Allow me to play Devil's Advocate for a moment...why would he have stopped to buy a cloak if he didn't want anyone to know where he was? Couldn't the wizards have caught the salesman and interrogated him as to the direction of which Mister Pear-thingy went with small child wrapped in blanket?
And guess what I've just done to my Dragon? He has a name now--its Julian--and a good reason to be scaly and fire-breathing. I'll email a copy to you.
I love it!!! :)
[:lilly:]