Eyes on Fire - Comments

James is the best vamp in Twilight... He's hotter than edward! :)
This is pretty awesome!;)

eight: A great job in showing James point of view. You still have problems *no offense* with not spacing words. Please get the next chapter up so that I can know what happens next.

seven: This is starting to become very addicting. Will they grant her request and put her out of her sadness? What does James think; can't wait to read his part? Can't wait to find out.

six: Wow; I saw this coming, but didn't know that it would be this soon. Will she meet anyone while she is running and thinking? Can't wait to read the next chapter.

five: I'm guessing that you have a story errors message *or not*. Guessing that it's for this one. All you need to do is reread it, find the words that isn't spaced, and space them like the part about her being bitten in her kitchen. So James was the one that actually turned her? Can't wait to read the next chapter.

four: Very cute, but sad as well. Still liking this. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

three: Sadly, I'd have to disagree about that; my favorite parts were all of his. He was just so hot. Now I can't wait to see the movie The Unborn; he stars as the main characters boyfriend. Anyways the story, liking this the more that I read it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

two: Liking this right now. Wondering if she will ever tell James? What will happen at the boat yard? Can't wait to read the next chapter.

one: Sounds interesting. This is the first James related story that I've read; so congrats on being first with that. Anyways, can't wait to read the next chapter.

Random: called first comment. Wondering if you could read my story. I know that it's not an A7X or a twilight story; but it is my first.